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Retribution Rising

In a world where shadows conceal more than darkness, follow the journey of Jack Steele, a retired soldier haunted by the ghosts of his past. Experimented on by a corrupt government agency, he emerges with enhanced abilities but a shattered life. When his family becomes victims of the same sinister forces, Jack's path transforms into a relentless quest for justice and revenge. As he navigates a web of conspiracy, betrayal, and lost loyalties, Jack must confront the shadows within himself to uncover the truth and reclaim a future stolen from him. "Retribution Rising" is a gripping novel series that explores the cost of vengeance and the strength found in the shadows of one man's shattered existence.

Alex_smith772 · Ficção Científica
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4 Chs

Prologue

December 2017

In the basement of an abandoned warehouse, an unsactioned experiment was done on young and smart soldiers of the army by high- level corrupt government agents and rich tycoons who were trying to create the perfect soliders for their personal use.

Today was the day of the final test before the scientists would unveil them to their bosses.

In one of the rooms in the lab were three soliders cuffed to a chair, each with a monitor in front of them, with each of them separated by glass slabs . In front of three remaining soldiers out of the thirty that were brought for experiment was a large mirror from which only scientists in the adjacent room could see thier "subjects".

Jason Turner, the head of scientists for the experiment, started the experiment on the next subject.

"Subject 28: Taylor Anderson

Age : 25

Specialisation : Marksman

Height: 5'9

Blood Group: AB Positive

Relatives: None

Start the download of neurosync" said Jason as the monitor in front of subject 28 came on.(Neurosync is a computer program which gives soliders ability to well-versed in martial arts, hand to hand combat and usage of weapons).

As subject 28 eyes were held wide open, thousands of images were being downloaded into his brain, and as the images were downloaded, he started to bleed from his ears and nose, and then he died.

"Experiment on Subject 28 failed, Subject 28 died in the process," Jason said as he signalled to the scientists to clean the mess and also dispose of the body.

Hi. So this is the first novel I have ever written so please tell what you feel about this prologue.

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