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Reborn Metal BAT on the MCU

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A new graduate dies, but has a chance to be born back. (very poorly written, I use the help of a translator, I'm still studying English and I'm trying to write better)

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Chapter 1I am the metal bat

My name is Antonio, just an ordinary 22 year old man, after studying for years I finally graduated, I thought I could get a job and a good wife, unfortunately a damn virus killed me.

I didn't see heaven or hell, just two giant roulette wheels, the first roulette had several names of animes, movies and games such as naruto, lord of the rings and mortal kombat, while the second roulette had names of fictional characters.

I've read many fanfics, no doubt I was lucky and I can reincarnate.

I started to spin the two roulette wheels, the first one finally stopped at MCU(mutants), this is a universe with large scale of power if I don't get a good luck on the second roulette I will be a punching bag.

Second roulette went through goku, sasuke and almost stopped at dora (dora and friends), I almost had my gender changed what a crap, luckily the roulette went through dora and stopped at metal bat.

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NEW YORK 1996 (MCU)

I am currently a 10 year old child, my name in this world is Kinzoku Batto, I look like a normal Japanese child the only difference is my hair, I have a really nice topknot, no matter how much I try to lower it it never bends down. Luckily I didn't have the misfortune of being an orphan, my father is called Kakuzu Batto, he is the leader of a small gang of 60 members of Japanese descent in NY, this gang only controls 3 or 4 neighborhoods, a gang that can be easily destroyed by others, most of the members use cold weapons like knives and my father uses a baseball bat, they charge protection fees from shopkeepers, my mother is Ino batto, beautiful 26 year old woman, although my father is a leader of gang our family is very good, at home my mother is the boss and my father strives to be a good father.

I didn't wake up any metal bat power, I suspect my powers will show up through the X gene, so I remembered the metal bat had many powers like increased stamina, agility and reflexes superior to humans, giant brute strength about to break buildings, mental resistance and having as main power his battle spirit, as long as he doesn't give up the fight and keep fighting, he gets stronger in scale, a very strong power.

"stop talking about your stupid gang to our son, damn you go back to work as a delivery boy and an example for our little boy, I don't want to see my son grow up and go around dressed like a rebellious teenager with a topknot" Ino to my father.

"wife I already told you this boy is more talented than me as a leader, if we support him he can become a great gang boss, maybe even become a politician, imagine our son governor of the state that's the future, as for At school he already knows more than we do, he always gets high marks, when I was 10 I already had 3 jobs and 5 girlfriends, he should grow up and assume his talent" kakuzu, "5 girlfriends hahahahaha, if it weren't for me to take action you would still be a virgin, no girl will want to be with a man with a topknot, now our son has a topknot like you how will he get a daughter-in-law in the future, he should study and go to college later give us grandchildren" Ino.

I just watched this scene, the two always fight but they love each other, I'm grateful to have a good family, to protect them I need power there's no way I'm going to be a mutant, there's going to be government and stupid villains behind me, the best power I can have now is money, I'm not a genius and I can't invent anything, I can invest in the stock market with my future knowledge to invest in microsoft but for that I need to get money, so making our gang bigger is the main objective, I don't want to be a hero but i will also keep some moral principle in the gang, prohibit rape and murder of innocents, as the school with my knowledge i can get graduated sooner to have time to expand the gang, "mom please let me help my dad with the gang, as far as school is concerned i promise i will graduate and also give you many grandchildren in the future, a good daughter-in-law and even some mistresses with bastard children", "my boy turned into a petty criminal with a topknot, look what you've done kakuzu, your idiot husband, it's okay if your dream is to be an idiot with a topknot mama can only have help in your dreams but when you have a kid he should go to college , at least my grandson must be a model citizen without topknot" Ino, I have a slight suspicion that my mother doesn't like a topknot.

Somehow I convinced my parents to let me become a criminal, in fact a cute 10 year old must have helped to soften their hearts, I have to create my criminal empire to have the strength to protect myself from the government and try to wake up my gene X to start training him, I'm still 12 years old until 2007, I think I'll be fine.

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I'm just gonna leave this review here 'cause I think this novel needs some positive feedback. While it's true that grammar seems to be the author biggest flaw I didn't find it to be as problematic as described in others reviews: words are never misspelled and the rarely seen syntax errors don't pose a problem to the comprehension of the story or the fluidity of the narration (since they're few and far between. I'm instead really intrigued by the plot of the story. The MC's power grants for an error proof power escalation that will avoid the fighting gets boring while also allowing him potential for growth. (I just hope the struggle for the win will be showcased with more Pathos in the future) The characters are vibrant enough, with clearly (although a bit one dimensional for now) personalities and ambitions. I'm a fan of the cast since several less know characters are used; also I really like both Annie (the other OC) powers and appearance. The power scaling is also well planned in my opinion. As for the world, although some wacky stuff happens (like him being the leader of a gang at 12), it's justified enough troughs the narration and the fact that this is a universe in which realism is kinda futile given the context. All in all this promises to be a well tough out story (especially considering the author is new at this). If I'm allowed to give some tips as a reader and not a experienced writer I would advise you to: -increase the dialogue; narration is the lazy man's way out and allows for very little creativity as emotions tends to get lost when only showing the results or actions. Writing dialogue consents for more confrontations to take place showcasing more intent in your character while it would also allow you to: be less paranoid about grammar (nobody speaks like they would write) and leave more the true thoughts of the speaker for the reader to figure out which I find a major appeal in. -increase the description; I trust in your creativity since I really like Annie's character and I would appreciate if you showcased it more during the story even in more subtle things: like reactions, scenery, actions etch... You shouldn't be afraid to slow down the plot for the sake of painting a more detailed picture. ...................................... Although I just wanted to show my appreciation for your novel this already turned into a thesis so I won't mind adding a few extra things at this point. I really hope the fact that his group is getting infiltrated won't be just an appendix to the fact that he now has great influence but will instead will turn into a plot point like Natasha "infiltration" did in iron man 2 I'm from the #NOHAREM gang, not that it will prevent me for reading the story. I just think that while being sexually attracted to multiple people being romantically invested in more than one person is not a thing. Thanks again for sharing your work and for reading my unjustifiably long review (hopefully)

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