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Rebirth In the 1970s

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Leia o romance Rebirth In the 1970s escrito pelo autor GodOfGreedAs publicado no WebNovel. After looking at suggestions of viewers it's acomplete rewrite better story and plot without any system. "I find myself at a crossroads in my writing journey. The pacing in the current storyline feels...

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After looking at suggestions of viewers it's acomplete rewrite better story and plot without any system. "I find myself at a crossroads in my writing journey. The pacing in the current storyline feels rushed, leaving little room for a proper introduction of the main character. Additionally, the timeline is disarrayed, prompting me to consider scrapping the existing concept and starting afresh in the 1970s. The new narrative would involve substantial plot development, transcending the current shitty Hollywood and the world as whole and exploring deeper themes. Making much better wish fulfillment story. Introduction of older actresses (females) without the system in place, I envision a tale featuring fundamental superpowers like longevity and super genius. ***Synopsis... "Have you ever wondered what a person will do when he finds himself on alternate earth?" In a realm teetering on the edge of chaos, our protagonist is bestowed with an extraordinary opportunity. Armed with the intellect and experiences of Norman Osborn from Earth-616, they embark on an ambitious journey to build not just an empire but a utopia. As the architect of his destiny, He navigates the intricate web of power, ambition, and innovation. However, with great potential comes great responsibility, and the choices made in the pursuit of this grand vision will shape not only his destiny but the fate of the world. Can he transcend the shadows of his past, break the shackles of ordinary existence, and truly forge a legacy that stands the test of time? Join our visionary protagonist as he navigates the challenges of building an empire and strives to create a better world against the backdrop of intrigue, ambition, and the relentless march of time people of dark kind. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: Harem, Pretty Big Harem, and world-hopping with a twist, no ntr, yes stealing girls, very lustful and pretty aggressive MC. Not really his fault though. He's not dumb either. I am doing this for fun, and it's fantasy just all books on this platform but it's going to be filled with realism. Love all the reader's thanks for your support And if you are very good at English I need an editor but no payment because even I don't earn A single penny from this thanks love you all

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"How are you feeling now?" he ask, his breath allover her neck as he is too close. She close her eyes breathing so heavily, gulping down nothing and tighten the grip on her Saree. She only felt the heat of his voice but didn't hear the sound so neglecting his question wasn't intentional Abhishek stare at the beauty in front of him through the mirror, he is lost in those eyes, those memorising eyes even though he is only staring at them through the mirror He wanted to hold himself back but his feelings wouldn't let him, so he cautiously kiss the back of her neck. Lakshmi gasp and flap her eyes open her heavy breathing not ceasing "I ask you a question" his voice came up in-between the kiss on her neck "I..I..." Lakshmi pause as she can feel his kissing traveling round her neck and shoulder. He slowly turn her to face him and get the clear view of her beautiful face, those feelings are burning inside him but he can't explain what they are He trace his fingers on her smooth cheek, the thrilling feelings made Lakshmi to close her eyes. He stare down at those pink soft lips begging him to taste them, they are so tempting that he couldn't control himself And not thinking twice he took her lips immediately, he softly slide his tongue into her mouth sucking the sweetness. Lakshmi unconsciously gave in to the kiss as she welcome the thickly feeling of esctacy Abhishek being so hungry of that lips devours them as an angry lion, he made his tongue wobble in her mouth and she let out a soft moan, he can't get enough of her even though he deepen the kiss... he needs something else, something to calm this burning feelings in him. She wrap her hand round his shoulder and that give him access to draw her more closer to himself as his hand rested on her bare back, his fingers touch her wound and the pain from it got her back from reality She quickly open her eyes and withdraw from the kissing, her heart beating so heavily, she gulp down trying to calm her heavy breathing, what is wrong with her... this is the second time she is giving in to his kiss and that makes her angry, no man has the right to kiss her if not Abhijit She felt Abhishek eyes on her, she twist her fingers nervously staring at the floor... one can hear the beating of her heart. Abhishek has the right to have her now since the kiss has awaken something in him but what is stopping him. He doesn't want to force her, that still doesn't make sense... She must not comply for him to have her, why is he so different towards her Lakshmi eyes keep staring at the floor, she didn't have the courage to look him in the eye, she prays he won't force her cos she is not ready. She will never even be ready because her heart belongs to someone else Abhishek stare at her for a minute and that was the longest minute in Lakshmi's life, the room was dead silent as the the only thing that could be heard is the beating of Lakshmi's heart "I will have someone bring an ointment for you, it will help heal the wound fast and leave no scar" he speak up after a long silent, he stare once more at her before leaving the room Lakshmi was able to let out the breath she has been holding all this while, what is taking preeta for long, she really need water at this point to calm herself What is wrong with her, she shouldn't feel that way about him... no she shouldn't, she loves Abhijit and will love no one else except him. She sits at the edge of her bed as she hold her beating heart

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Kabuk5
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Grammatically, this story is a mess, in the middle of the same paragraph there's a change between subjects, when conversations are happening, you have no idea who's speaking (in chapter 4 his mom told him that in the 2000s people would be less religious, or at least it looked like that because there was no separation between the conversation and his thoughts), the character also behaves so far as if wisdom is his dump stat. If you research a world's culture, you MUST research its religion, specially if you want to write about sensitive subjects! Not enough time for character development or world background, so giving it three stars at the moment and will come back in a few months and address this review.

crazyspecter
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tbh the problem is this story is a copy paste of Rebirth in 1973s by xandarx with some random changes who make the story even more awful grammar wise then the original. neverthless I would increase my vote if the author can promise he will keep updating the story past the original dropping point (around chapter 62 or something)

WEEEEBS
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I love it Hope to see more updates in the future

Bob_Uchiha_XD
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So, more chapters and the novel is bored , because MC is very perfect: - Super smart. - Beautiful. - Millionaire. - The effort, wait or difficulty to pay for something is unknown to the protagonist. Besides, what's the point of having millions of dollars, health, youth and intelligence if you don't enjoy it? By the way, this novel is #non-harem and I understand that it is the author's decision; However, it is foolish to tie yourself down for life to the first girlfriend you have, who by the way is a college student with experience with other men. 🙄

Cesar117
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La gramática está bien.Pero las fechas, empresas y linea del tiempo es terrible. Hasta la persona más tonta sabe que empresas como Amazon y Google no existían en 1970. De hecho muchos de sus creadores ni siquiera habían nacido.

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