crazyspecter

writing quality awesome, at first the mc was super too but when the author choose his romantic partner (a crappy bullshit one) was the beginning of the end: at first the partner was having character growth and the story was improvomg then the authpr choose to go back and make her the way she was and the mc became a retard simp with a level of denseness and blindness on everything equal to a shonen mc when dealing with romance. A waste of a story at least until the author complete this ark and shows that is cooking something instead of being random...even then with how slow are the updates and most of all the development of the plot in each chapter ypu probably would need 60 chapters and 6 months before reaching that point

well this story turned to shit you made your mc a retard simp for no reason except making drama to try expand the story

door door fruit would be useful I cam see using it as a teleportation portal

yeah this self nerfing of chinese authors is absurd, there are some miscellanous very usel fruits like blueno' s door soor fruit

you may have improved the flow but there are glaring mistakes like calling 100k thousands beast a 10000 one xd

why...I shpuld have known any author with ghost in their name will end up creating a shitload of stupidity

not possible she is only slightly than Janet she would have needed to be really a barely teen mom

Beautiful

You are Jorah’s even more of an hypocrite Pos than he was in canon

diddy but it is the same...puff daddy diddy, rapi"st