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Primordial Eyes

Jone, when he lived on earth, was a handsome young man who, for traumatic reasons as a child, lived in his locked house, living melancholically. Because he was blind in both eyes, he felt he would never see the beautiful side of life. And because of that, he made no effort to do anything and deeply regretted it. When he died and woke up in the body of a fifteen-year-old boy in another world where powerful cultivators, mystical beings, and divine races lived, he decided to live his new life as he wanted and without regrets. Right when he woke up, he discovered that in this new world, his eyes were now special, they carried great powers but were extremely difficult to control, and they had great seals that locked away something that this world had long forgotten. (5 chapters a week, maybe more) (This is my first novel, English is not my first language, mistakes or anything you don't understand, please let me know) :)

krullt · Oriental
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62 Chs

Death

When Jone woke up, the pain around his eyes had lessened, but was still there. He tried to open his eyes, but soon gave up, without success.

After the accident, Jone is now completely blind in both eyes, his left eye was punctured during the accident, leaving a deep scar on his left eye.

He lived for the next ten years of his life, experiencing pain in his eyes every few days.

Because of this, his uncle sought out renowned doctors and expensive hospitals to find a solution to these pains, but no one was able to discover the reason for the pain.

Returning to the present. Jone is still standing on the edge of his building, remembering the last few dull years and thinking that he would live like this for the rest of his life.

As soon as I decided to leave the balcony and go back inside, I felt an unbearable pain in my eyes, greater than at any other time.

Perhaps because he was used to frequent pain, even in this pain that was greater than anything he felt, he did not faint again.

He tried to jump into the house, but he couldn't move his body, his body was completely paralyzed with pain and then he felt like he was falling.

Feeling his body accelerate as he fell from his building, for some reason, he felt calmer than ever, he just felt regretful.

'I think I should have enjoyed it more...' Jone sighed.

'I wish I had done more things, my life was boring. If I had another chance, I would have...

Then, with a crash, his body fell to the ground, completely lifeless. Screams, police car sirens and ambulances were heard in the background.

No one could see his body, but three lights came from his mutilated body on the ground.

A dark, bizarre and desperate light came out from the place where his right eye was born.

From his left eye, a calm, deep and mysterious light escaped from his long-lost eye.

A faint, almost disappearing white light came out from his forehead, but when the other two lights saw this disappearing aura, they quickly integrated with it and then disappeared.

It's harder than I imagined, but I'm enjoying writing it.

I hope it's interesting for you. :)

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