Hello Guys, I am here. I started this fanfiction because I couldn't find enjoyable novels about pokemon. Most of them I read or it is dropped so I started this novel with instant excitement. Because of this, you can find this fanfiction is boring and dislike it.
At the begin of the novel, I used first-viewed writing style which similar to auto-biography. But later, I begin to dislike it. After a little thought, I changed it and begin to use the third side- viewed style. In my opinion, the new style is much more good. Because of this, I fixed previous chapters. While fixing them, also I fixed some of the grammar problems which I saw. Thus, the novel looks better.
Also, there is a change in the information. For example, before I said that gym trainers are advanced level. With the fix, it becomes an elite trainer. The day-care system also changes. To open Daycare House breeders need to be an intermediate level breeder.
I hope you like it too. You can suggest your thought about this novel to develop myself. With this way, I write better and you will enjoy much more.
Because of those fixes, I suggest you read in the beginning. It has already short chapters. So, you don't have to spend much time.
I also opened pat reon account, you can support from there if you enjoy this fanfiction. I will try to upload the day after's chapters.
patre-on.com/coloredworm
I will try to upload a chapter everyday araound 1000 words. Sometimes it becomes more or less.