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Pokemon: Brock's Younger Brother?

Autor: Del123
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What is Pokemon: Brock's Younger Brother?

Leia o romance Pokemon: Brock's Younger Brother? escrito pelo autor Del123 publicado no WebNovel. David never thought he would be transmigrated after a tired day of work. Waking up to the feeling of nausea. But there he was... Now on his feet up in the middle of a dark room with his other siblings...

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David never thought he would be transmigrated after a tired day of work. Waking up to the feeling of nausea. But there he was... Now on his feet up in the middle of a dark room with his other siblings there. "I'm Forrest?" Looking around David was shaken as he assessed his situation. David was in for a surprise as the son of Flint and the second eldest of the family as Brock's little brother. ___________________ There will be no "Levels" or "Talents". The Story will be more realistic with add-ons by myself of course. But I won't make the story "dark" as I enjoy Pokemon for the brighter side of the series and catching Pokemon. Some cities, towns, or small pieces of information will be made up myself to fit the story.

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True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4True_Vanity

So far I’ve enjoyed the story. I Cant wait for it to get even better!

Del123
Del123AutorDel123

If y’all got questions on things about the fic then I’ll gladly reply if I think it’s fine to answer. This fic is just something I’m doing out of boredom and am doing in class as I procrastinate. That’s a lot of time to make chapters lol. But don’t get me wrong, this fic is “planned out” but I tend to change things a lot xD. So nothing is set in stone just yet.

simpp
simppLv1simpp

were u inspired by hard enough..................................................................................................................................

Lucifer20
Lucifer20Lv4Lucifer20

Is this still ongoing

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

Awesome pokemon story. Very original in choosing a sibling of brock as the MC. I love the family dynamic, his choice of pokemon, and the overall trajectory of the story so far. Grammar and updating speed are on point as well. Nothing truly to disparage or criticize that wouldn't be nitpicking or personal preference. also Bea is wifey for lifey material. Just saying. Keep up the good work!

jose_carmona
jose_carmonaLv1jose_carmona

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RealJoke_Pota
RealJoke_PotaLv4RealJoke_Pota

It's a gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood story... now go read it ya jelly filled donut.

EnragedKing
EnragedKingLv15EnragedKing

I'm quite happy with how this story is progressing and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

Duke_Sahib
Duke_SahibLv4Duke_Sahib

ok so writing quality is awesome and the author updates regularly what i think is a bit lackluster is the story development because of the fast pace events. it isn't bad persay but still can be improved on by adding some events here and there. another thing i want to add is character development the character of MC is good but other characters are not well fleshed out such as Flint and Bea. one tip is that you can make Bea's character more serious as anime in the beginning and slowly mellow the character to show the willingness to interact ( the cafe interaction was good but you could have added it bit further in the story ) overall the story is fantastic you can improve on the story as you progress I am looking forward to see the story progress

Kurosis
KurosisLv4Kurosis

Interesting I haven’t read a fanfic about Forrest I like the direction this is going. And a bug plus is he actually takes advantage of knowing Information from the show

Azim_Sheaik
Azim_SheaikLv3Azim_Sheaik

The story is progress very well, up until now. Just hope you won't drop it.👍👍. w8 for more chapters😁

md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

Bro can you increase the update speed, pretty plz~

1vel
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Have enjoyed it so far time seems like a factor unlike in a lot of other stories. Another thing is that the mcs choices seems resonable

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