Pokemon - Genetic Evolution

I have written it so of course I will give it 5 stars. The story will progress as the people opinion about in. It will truly begin in about 15+ chapters. Until then it will be about the wonderful world about Pokémon and will end with me using it to go beyond what even a legendary Pokémon can dream of. There is be no other Oc, and Mc will have to have a huge character development which is why it is 30 years before canon. So yea, no Harem just a Mc which is selfish and will do anything to reach his goal. Now now but in the future.

Great story with awesome plot so far. It touches pokemon universe in a whole different level with both pokemons AND the protagonist becoming stronger aiming for the ultimate evolution, not a childish happy world like the Series, more realistic and real. Hoping more mass releases :D The only issue that i found it was mistakes here and there, but nothing like a repetition of the same word again and again, if the author read carefully before publishing it would probably resolve it, since the author is open for complains in grammar, here it is. Other thing that would raise the quality of this novel would be more description of some chacters and more interactions with them, not him talking with himself in his mind or with his pokemons. Creating original Chacters would resolve it. Another would be the progress, it is a bit too fast, creating some situations like find fossils and others small adventures would be more enjoyable to read, ( Like find a rare Herb, Megastone, heck even helping the police in stopping traffic/kidnapping/etc). I hope the author understand that i like his story so far and that is so much room to improve himself and his novel, that this is just a healthy critic for the better, this Webnovel has potential to reach top 50 easily.

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Generally, when I see the titles 'pokemon', I don't even go near that story, but I gave it a chance because of 'genetic evolution's. This suggests that this story is not written by a kid. And I have to say it lives up to it's name. This is the best Pokémon fanfic and the only one that I read. The only problem is that author is not keeping the general Pokémon theme alive. The process of catching pokemon, the battle and the journey. The adventure. The story is going a bit too fast for my taste and I would request author to slow it down a bit. Specially after author's change after his parent's death. And he should've killed the fuckin' team rocket, not that Pokémon. Well whatever. The story is good overall.

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The mc is awesome very brilliant and share the love of all Pokémon fans to capture legendary Pokémon not like sissy Ash who sucks in all ways possible. Secondly this is by far the best Pokémon fanfic I've ever read kudos Mr writer, though we haven't seen your darkside yet with all the legendary Pokémon in your asernal it's just a matter of time before you evolve keep. So said that such a wonderfully gem was dropped really sad

Excellent story. Excellent character of MC. Nothing lame like how it is in Anime. Only problem is that MC is a bit overly powered though. But that is the case in most such stories. I did wonder who the villians or rivals will be given how strong MC has become. That said, the author needs to continue the story. Definitely worth reading if you like Pokemons

Its a great novel.The character has a big ambition of beind abnormal to the point of not being human anymore by wanting to somehow evolve which is very interesting. What bother is the lack of announcements of when the author will start publishing chapter again.

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I love these story but i want an update emediatly And the story are much focused on lycan it doent give chances to others and about that you dont have any updates yet but the story are great

It is a good concept, but systems are awesome Who are you kidding................................................................................................ 9.......

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best pokemon fan fic that I have read so far. I highly recommend for people that are looking to read a good pokemon story.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can only say that I love it 🥰 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚🥳

Love the fighting schapters it has good details....so keep it up 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚

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