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Naruto: Challenger system

Nathan Hunt, orpah and entrepreneur. Who never knew his parents, and never cared to look for them. Died and reincarnated, where? You already know that.

Mauritany_DL · Fantasia
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35 Chs

The new 'Matsuo'

In the darkest corner of the world, a man ran out with the newest generation of chip based ninja tools "Beateruto! Come here!"

"Yes dad?" A boy somewhere else in the darkness asked, listening to his father.

"My boy, there's going to a weird jutsu robot, I want you to beat it up. Don't worry, the intellegence of a child." The man said reasuringly.

"Okayyy!" He said cherily and suddenly went silent after catching the ninja tool.

He silently ran over to konoha in a few minutes, and waited while watching two karma users have fun.

He saw a woman rush in and start fighting, the moment she said that her name was Delta he yelled while jumping down from the tree "It is I! The great beateruto! Now beating even cyborg adults with the intelligence of a child!"

He rushed forward with a click from his hand, a sword of metal formed from the earth below and flew into his hands. Letting him cut the cyborg in half without repercussion or jutsu absorbtion "It worked! Ah! This is great! It seems jutsu absorbtion doesn't work on physical objects!"

He made a hero pose and yelled to the heavens "Beateruto strikes again!" he then jumped away into the shadows of evilllll!

After a week of waiting Delta the delusional reapeared, and was rushed at by the great beateruto.

After another week it happened again, and again, and again, and again.

Until one day, about 3 months later Beateruto was no longer satisfied with that, he started to punch and kick her into the stratosphere. He nodded to himself and killed her again.

Beateruto was happy and accepted his new post, going to kill 'the Otsotsuki', whose name was Ishiki.

That whole kashin vs person 1 happened, and the relaxing Matsuo became shocked "I completely forgot about the akashic record!" He teleported to his magma ridden underground store, he picked up the correct book from the fuinjutsu and teleported back "Ah! This is what I was missing! How did I forget about this for fifteen years?"

"Makes me wonder, what else have I forgotten?" He snapped his fingers and put on a blood red cloak "Aha! Brings back memories of the good old days!"

He ripped a ticket and appeared in a miniture world, he punched right infront of him "It is I, Matsuo the great!"

He put a bit chakra into in his step and kicked Ishikki in the face, right after which he spewed copious rivers of blood "God damn it! So dumb of me to get hit by that!" He looked at his chest and saw multiple black mettalic things piercing through him "Isn't that a little too unfair?"

Matsuo already felt light-headed "And now I have anemia, thanks man!" He got real mad, blood is a valuable object to him. When he saw a giant cube appear above him... "F***, I'm gonna die now."

He put all his stuff into his inventory with the thought process of 'If I can't have it, no one can!', he hoped one of the destiny duo would save him, but... "Sorry, but we can't save you, haha!" Sasuke yelled.

Seems to be salty, little too salty. Matsuo accepted his fate, but then the his left eye did something! "F*** this, I'm not going down that easily." The left eye actually told him what it does, or more importantly, to use it!

"Come on!" He yelled "Reverse universe!" Of course he changed the name from the japanese version into something a bit more paletable for himself.

As he did this both his eyes instead of being red, distorted with purple boxes around it into a white eyes, blind ones. He was pushed back through the river of time and appeared in a forest without sight, and a serious case of anemia, beyond previously attained.

He completely collapsed from anemia, he couldn't see shit beyond the system's windows. Still got ears and all the other senses though "System! Fill me up with blood!"

[Negative, the host is too poor, and is a 'pauper']

"What? I-I'm a pauper?" Matsuo was filled with disbelief and despair, he opened up his inventory to put on some clothes, he still had them. But there wasn't money in his inventory, he became... A pauper!

Matsuo stood up gravely after a few hours for his blood levels to rise back to acceptable levels, it seemed that his steel physique was still up and running. But where was he?

He did hear a fight going on, so he walked over. He wasn't too afraid, his body was at least ten times stronger than steel, he heard the signature noise of jutsu so it was still naturo and not one of the other ones.

He put on his cloak and rushed over with his face covered, started to use chakra in an echolocation style in the heat of the moment. He couldn't see, but at least he got a basic perception of his surroundings. Not running into poor trees, he still beat them on his path to the fight. It's become tradition at this point.

With his new bat metamorphosis he rushed in and punched on of the two combatants with grand fist of destiny, right through the chest, for the heart.

The combatant fell to the ground and Matsuo started to feel up the face for eyes "There it is." He ripped the two eyes and replaced his own with it, ad some healing ninjutsu to connect the nerves...

"Eh?" Matsuo still couldn't see, he started to get a bit angry 'System! What is the meaning of this?!'

[Dojutsu 'Reverse universe' breaks your 'Concept' of sight, even if new eyes are obtained, unless it is fixed you will be blind, forever. Even if you reincarnate again, the problem is in your soul and your eyes. The eyes have been fixed, but the soul hasn't.]

"Nooo!" Matsuo cried in pain and agony, he ran away in tears. Leaving behind a confused ninja with a corpse without eyes.

he ran into a mountain and made a cave with a punch, there he cried himself to sleep.

A week later of straight mourning his loss of eye sight, he finally opened the light, moon light to precise. He had no clue it was night, since he couldn't see light. And, who knows what season it is? Not him.

Matsuo felt himself up and found himself with his ninja tool, and chakra, which was good "Shadow clone jutsu!"

"I can't see." The shadow clone said, dealing a major hit to Matsuo's confidence in exploits.

"Go out! Create chakra sources! And create a suitable chakra echolocation technique!" Matsuoo said after he created another shadow clone "It's a shame I don't have a chakra source, now I'm but a chakra pauper."

Matsuo then returned to his depressional life and started to sleep with a heavy scar to his heart, after which he could use his echolocation better. This repeated a while before a shadow clone had a good enough echolocation to kill someone a hundred times overall, enough to make a source.

Which then increased the duration of the clone, and allowed more kills per clone, slowly increasing like a snowball rolling off of a snowy hill. Then he took one for himself to increase clone production, then he upgraded it a few times, then gave it away to a clone for a perma-clone.

Then that perma-clone made an army of clones and started to kill a lot of people, not like the clones could ad on faces to that person with echolacation. For some weird reason he couldn't use chakra to sense light, appearantly it was the concept of 'Sight' putting in its work for him.

He also went from 'Pauper' to 'poor' with organ harvesting operations.

One day Matsuo descided to wonder the world, a day later "Hey! Isn't this that village with the girl that betrayed me while I was acting like an old man? Let's see..."

Too Matsuo's shagrin, he saw the girl that he helped while he was a greenhorn, as a child "Let's make her my little toy now, won't be too hard. The human mind is so easy to manipulate with a little elbrow grease, and she'll be good looking when she grows up anyways. Tsunade levels."

Matsuo had a clone take the place of her best friend, and then led her too the forest with it. There was Matsuo's real body, with all its flaws, artistically and practically, artificially fixed. Making Uchiha Matsuo turn into, Perfected Matsuo.

He surpassed his old name after he asked the system something a week ago after not seeing a bloodline section anywhere in his status.

[You have no bloodlines, so a bloodline 'Section' would be redundant.]

"Where did they go system?!" Matsuo asked with high blood pressure.

[They were used up by 'Reverse universe'.]

"Fuckkk! Why does that use so much shit!?" Matsuo asked with extreme blood pressure.

['Reverse universe' Reverses the time of the universe to the user's birth or as close as it can while making sure the user doesn't attain any permanent or life threatening damage, of course it costs a lot to use. The loss of sight is just the minimum price, that's only when you're at a certain level though. It also erases your existance in birth, pretty much replacing you with a plausible version of yourself with a different name and different soul. What? Did you think only your sight was enough to pay for all that?]

Matsuo's blood pressure gained such a high level of achievement on the dao that he passed out after coughing out blood in anger.

After which he decided to change his name, because; 'Since I don't have the bloodline, why should I constrict my naming sense to but 'Uchiha' only?'

"A world that will never change, or a world that has already changed." Matsuo said listlessly to the stary sky above "I wonder, wonder which one was I?" While the girl and friend were listening on him.

He took out a piece of paper on it, he looked at it with watery eyes "Don't say you want to die, live on without giving up!" There was japanese on it, but it was too far away to read. It said 'If you're reading this, then you're an idiot with good eye sight. Must've eaten a lot of carrots, that's what increases eye sight, right?'

The paper burned between his index and middle finger, and Perfected Matsuo stood up with his doaist immortal clothes "This secenery is good, a good place to see the stars. It's about time I leave this place, time to come back to the forefront of this world, back as Perfected Matsuo the 'King of the clouds'. Maybe I'll come back another day... Maybe."

Perfected Matsuo step by step, slowly walked into the forest, outside of the artificially created 'Beautiful place for gazing at the stars' clearing. Dissapearing from all forms of sight.

About an hour later he appeared in a magical place, a dark and dreary cave while seeming slightly blurry to all types of 'sight', since appearantly if you don't have a concept of something in you, you don't need to abide by the rules of it.

Perfected Matsuo was going to become invisible to all types of 'Sight'! The great Perfected Matsuo cannot be chained by mere 'existence'! Further less, mere 'Sight'!

I'm back! Maybe?

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