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My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite

Autor: Azazyel
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  • 4.5
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Rewrite of my first story that got me into writing.- Jake Barriss is dropped into the world of Danmachi with the ability to combine all things into one. Will he fall to the dungeon? Or will he leave his mark on the immortal realm of Genkai

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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv5Kwetzal_Lag

It's a rewrite from a good author who has gotten better

Garland
GarlandLv4Garland

Eh overall i kinda prefer the original. Yeah it was kinda ridiclous but since it already set up such a ridiculous start, it was always expected that it wasn't going to turn completely serious. Here while i do like that he joined the Hephaestus Familia, the info drop that this was set years prior to the start of canon was a little jarring as it never felt that it was set in the past. Besides that, the ocs aren' t really clicking i mean we have Tina(i think that was her name was) is just an oc version of pretty much Liliruka.Yeah sure the original wasn't perfect and had a lot of changes to canon but it was pretty much consistent. Overall, i kinda miss the original one.

read3r_9030
read3r_9030Lv14read3r_9030

can't wait for more chapters, the original was really good, and this is a rewrite with a different starting point. even the MC ability is slightly different than the original, which is good cause then we know that this isn't a copy an paste fan fiction.

EoH017
EoH017Lv4EoH017

really like the fanfic and how it's put in the 'golden' era of adventuring.plus I really appreciate the OCs

ManiacReader1
ManiacReader1Lv3ManiacReader1

really good writing of the characters and conversations, doesn't at all feel like a robot talking or it's too much cringe that you can't even look at it. overall this story is a really good read.

TheOldOne_
TheOldOne_Lv4TheOldOne_

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Lazy_sensei8
Lazy_sensei8Lv14Lazy_sensei8

Are you going to continue this I really enjoy it?

Bomberman
BombermanLv4Bomberman

aza man, you can delete books now! now all the books you dropped that quite literally, hit the leaderboard every single time can be cleaned up!

Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1Braian_Rodriguez

50 capitulos en un año, dejame decir que estoy decepcionado, pero encontrar una historia divertida y genial, que no abusa de etiqueta como "Tragedias" y "traición" es difícil hoy en día, me preguntó que les pasa a esos autores? Tienen problemas en casa? Mi opinión es que está historia es genial, te lo pierdes si no la lees, buena gramática y agradables diálogos, el mc de este autor es generalmente OP, no le halló ningún problema, en fin, bueno provecho.

DEVAM_aggarwal
DEVAM_aggarwalLv13DEVAM_aggarwal

a great novel but random update times...

Cesar117
Cesar117Lv2Cesar117

Este es uno, o quizás el mejor fanfiction de dannachi que e visto. El único que está a la par, es irónicamente el otro que creo el mismo autor y que incluso comparte el nombre del protagonista.

elpepe
elpepeLv2elpepe

Es un buen fanfic, pero la baja tasa de actualización en comparación con la longitud de los capítulos, arruina un poco la experiencia, por todo lo demás está bien.

OloEyktan
OloEyktanLv4OloEyktan

Spoiler de revelação

Jose_Leo
Jose_LeoLv3Jose_Leo

I like the way the stories development so far because it's based in the past of Zeus and Hera familia you can get to see some of that time and how the story will change drastically with the protagonist

Rtanj
RtanjLv4Rtanj

Amazing unique fic set in the time when Zeus and Hera familias are still at their peak! Very unique and nicely written plus the MC is loyal to his wife which made the whole story a million times better.

Bootur_Markov_8070
Bootur_Markov_8070Lv3Bootur_Markov_8070

Great story of "Golden era" danmachi. Very interesting see MC in such high level environment?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Shogeyo
ShogeyoLv4Shogeyo

It's a fun read .

guarek03
guarek03Lv1guarek03

Great story, I can't wait to read more.....................................................................................................................

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1_DEKIM_

Meh.a better ability would be biokinesis. the ability to fuse is complicated and it seems like there is someone controlling the ability. biokinesis or telekinesis would be better.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

Murderous_Gaming
Murderous_GamingLv15Murderous_Gaming

Just how I feel as now at Chapter 7.....

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