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Jose_Leo
Jose_LeoLv41yr
2024-04-21 12:35

I like the way the stories development so far because it's based in the past of Zeus and Hera familia you can get to see some of that time and how the story will change drastically with the protagonist

My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite

Azazyel
4.4
94 Chs

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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv5

It's a rewrite from a good author who has gotten better

1yr

Garland
GarlandLv4

Eh overall i kinda prefer the original. Yeah it was kinda ridiclous but since it already set up such a ridiculous start, it was always expected that it wasn't going to turn completely serious. Here while i do like that he joined the Hephaestus Familia, the info drop that this was set years prior to the start of canon was a little jarring as it never felt that it was set in the past. Besides that, the ocs aren' t really clicking i mean we have Tina(i think that was her name was) is just an oc version of pretty much Liliruka.Yeah sure the original wasn't perfect and had a lot of changes to canon but it was pretty much consistent. Overall, i kinda miss the original one.

1yr
read3r_9030
read3r_9030Lv14

can't wait for more chapters, the original was really good, and this is a rewrite with a different starting point. even the MC ability is slightly different than the original, which is good cause then we know that this isn't a copy an paste fan fiction.

1yr
EoH017
EoH017Lv4

really like the fanfic and how it's put in the 'golden' era of adventuring.plus I really appreciate the OCs

1yr
ManiacReader1
ManiacReader1Lv3

really good writing of the characters and conversations, doesn't at all feel like a robot talking or it's too much cringe that you can't even look at it. overall this story is a really good read.

1yr
Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1

50 capitulos en un año, dejame decir que estoy decepcionado, pero encontrar una historia divertida y genial, que no abusa de etiqueta como "Tragedias" y "traición" es difícil hoy en día, me preguntó que les pasa a esos autores? Tienen problemas en casa? Mi opinión es que está historia es genial, te lo pierdes si no la lees, buena gramática y agradables diálogos, el mc de este autor es generalmente OP, no le halló ningún problema, en fin, bueno provecho.

11mth
KingIBob
KingIBobLv4

…. ….….……….….….….……….….……….….…… . . . . . . .

1yr
Bertinho_Gamer
Bertinho_GamerLv1

the only redeeming point about this novel is the character personalities which are well built. however the whole other bunch of the story is a slightly fiasco: no detailed world context, no clear power progression, dumb protagonist decisions couldve been a masterpiece, though i guess the author does not seek serious storytelling, but rather a kind of simple minded fic

4mth
Lazy_sensei8
Lazy_sensei8Lv15

Are you going to continue this I really enjoy it?

8mth
Bomberman
BombermanLv4

aza man, you can delete books now! now all the books you dropped that quite literally, hit the leaderboard every single time can be cleaned up!

9mth
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