I feel better now.
Pls give me your opinion pls, on the other chapters! Even though there are very few (like there are literally 5 chapters altogether), pls give me your opinion whether i should change this to an actual story. If so, the earlier chapters will become wither a backstory for a character or just a hidden story of people from somewhere before the actual story. Laso pls tell me how to put comments for my chapters cuz for some reason I cant comment on chapters and I think neither can any of you. I think I might delete this chapter after you choose.
type '1 op' for the book to stay as it is.
type '2 op' for the book to change to an actual story