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My rebirth is a bit wrong

I'm French, and I use Google Translate, so tell me if you see a bad mistake. Don't beat me in the comment, please. Our protagonist is an IT Developer, One day he goes to the supermarket to get some pasta because his food pantry is empty. When he came back, he makes his curry pasta. He is going to eat them on the rooftop. But then a mysterious, strong wind pushes him from the building into the void. When he was going to hit the ground, he saw the 'God' and his life goes wrong from there…

Deisy · Fantasia
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Luna Nikolson

Looking at herself in the mirror, Luna can see her figure. The mirror is not as good as this present in his 'dream', but it is relatively sharp, and it is an object that costs a lot of Orbs.

By scrutinizing her reflection from head to toe, and examining her in detail despite the fact that she knows her body by heart. She realizes that she is still beautiful even if she has just gotten up, that she is not washed, styled and made up.

Luna is 1.59 m high, the weight of her body probably does not exceed 56 kilos. The shape of his body is quite voluptuous, it forms an S with volumes present without being too troublesome for his movements. His hair reaches him to the middle of the back, they are platinum blonde color almost white, and they are thin without being too thin, but at the same time quite soft. His eyes are gray in color like his father, Nikola. And the face is similar to him from his mother, Maria. When she smiles there are 2 dimples that form on the cheeks, her face is quite round with a little baby fat.

Once Luna finished contemplating herself in the mirror, she walked to the bathroom to wash.

In the bathroom, she sees a small circular-shaped pool in the center with water vapor that shows that the water is hot. The water was heated by a magical fire ore. Only the richest have a bathroom, but again most do not have the chance to have a magic fire ore to heat their bath. The small pool is comparable to a large jacuzzi in its 'dream'. The room, which was just as big as the room, doesn't have much within it apart from the small pool. There is no window to keep privacy and everything is wet with water vapor.

3,000 words are omitted while Luna bathes…

When Luna finished her bath, she walked to her dressing room wrapped in a velvet towel.

The dressing room is also the same size as her bedroom, she stores here all her belongings that are tidy and can be seen everywhere in the room, even in the center, the furniture forms passages. Most of his clothes are dresses of all kinds, there are even in several copies that are of different colors. They are arranged in furniture, cabinets, all around the room. Below the clothes were storage, where several pairs of shoes are stored. Along with dresses, there are also a few corsets, coats resembling the vast majority of capes as well as underwear and tights. In the center, there are all kinds of decoration like hats, gloves, belts and then a whole bunch of jewelry more expensive than each other, which are rings, necklaces, hairpins or headbands.

As she walked through the room while touching the different clothes, Luna thought, "What can I put on today."

After a while, she ended up skillfully taking a set of daily clothing that consists of: a dress, a corset, an underwear for the top as the bottom, a coat for the cold, gloves to protect her hands from freshness, a headband to hold the hair, a belt, tights, 3 ring 2 for the right hand 1 for the left hand and a necklace which are of course set with a gemstone, then shoes with a small heel.

Luna took everything to her room after several trips, the dress is quite bulky, she put everything on her bed. The dress is white in color with cherry pink colored fabric, the corset is gray, the gloves and belts are gray, the headband is white in color, and the shoes are gray leather boots.

After a long while, Luna is out of breath. Putting on all these clothes makes a nice result, but to put them on their own, it's worse than warrior training. Between 2 breaths Luna muttered "Why I put everything alone, while there are servants to help me do it... It's probably because of the 'dream'. I almost forgot to style my hair, fortunately I don't have too much makeup to put on otherwise the sun would go down when I'm done."

With that, she walked over to the dressing table, sat down, and began to do that hairstyle and makeup.

When she finished, she stood in front of the large mirror and then turned with a smile drawn on her face. After looking at her beauty, she muttered "It's time to see if mom and dad are in the living room and especially started to inspect what I could make to make everyday life easier with my neutral magic. But before that, I need to check if the autonomous enchantments are like programming in my 'dream'."

Once the double door of her room was opened, she saw the large hallway connecting all the

rooms in the house. In the hallway on one side there are the doors that lead to the bedrooms and on the other a full window that serve to illuminate the hallway. Thinking of this, Luna said softly, "It would take artificial light like the bulbs on the 'earth'. This invention is too useful, and it reduces the risk of fire because of torches." While walking, she wrote down everything, she needed to carry out this project.

After several minutes of walking while growing, a significant number of servants that Luna greeted. She finally arrived in the living room...

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