well, let's get the good stuff out, writing quality is good enough for web novels' standards. Update stability can be seen from the fic tab (at the time of writing, it's 3 chapters a week). ok, that's enough so just let's get on with the bad aspects of this fic.
no character development, bs wish fulfillment, glaring loopholes, dues ex machina at its finest or was it called the plot armor, and no world background whatsoever, just some bare-bone knowledge to fool one into reading whatever this fic is.
in short, if someone wants to read something only to say uh huh? ok, then, congratulations, you have this hot sweaty garbage to chow down, otherwise a word of extreme caution, the author is hell-bent on persuading others that he is a Chad and not a virgin loner/loser in someone's basement. (no offense but I just couldn't help myself after getting the reading on my lunacy radar.)
