This dude should join erin

"HANDS OFF MY SISTER!" I shouted. a guy took a brick and it hit my head and it bleed. The guy walked to me and smiled. "why aren't you a little savior of your little sister?" he said and moved my head by his leg. "leave the girls alone" ren said. "why should i? I need them" he said. "the girls, are going to get hurt! please! I made a promise to myself to remove them out of mess!" I shouted. "a promise?" the guy said and sat on his knees and looked at me. "yes" I said. "well, my elder made a promise too! she promised she wouldn't kill herself! But she did! Why should your sister believe you!?" the guy said and laughed wickedly. "please" I said. I pulled my phone out of my pockets without anyone noticing and I dialed a number. "I'LL KILL YOU ALL!" the guy shouted. he was mad! Totally mad! He should join those gangster group of erin!!! "hey bro, listen…. me and this guy we'll do whatever you like, just set the girls free" I said. "anything?" he said. "anything" I said. "then kill the girls! what will you do then!!?" the guy shouted. "I'll do anything except killing the girls or doing things to them" I said. "okay then" the guy said. the person answered the call and I had dialed proper number of the police. They heard whatever we said and I on my tracker. "I'll keep my tracker on for you guys! You can find out where we are! The police is going to come! I saw a lady calling them" I said. the police understood the trouble. "this sari sara hospital right?" I asked them. "yeah" the guy said. the police cut the call and one of them noticed the call. "sir he had call the police" one of them said. the guy got up and kicked my face. "oh really?" he said. "no, I didn't… stop-p l-ying" I said. my sister screamed at the guy in anger. One of them untied the girls and my sister head straight to the guy and held his collar. "oh, look what do we have here?" the guy said and went close to my sister's face. "get away from my sister!" suzy shouted and lift her leg to kick the guy. The guy caught her leg. suzy fell on the ground and it hurt her. a knife almost hit my hand! it got stuck in the wall and those guys were distracted to separate that guy and my sister. I pulled the knife out and untied myself. Suddenly a bunch of cars of police sounds came. They had microphone in their hands and shouted. "COME OUT OR WE WILL!" the polices shouted. "guess your brother make a call" the guy said and held my sisters waist. They tied my sisters hands and didn't let her go. I broke the window till then and grabbed ren. I jumped down and the police saw us and helped. "are you the one who called?" they asked. "yes sir" I said. they helped ren and I had to get my sister out… but those guys came out themselves. "hey!" the guy shouted holding my sister. one of the police asked, "who is that girl?". "she is my sister" I said. ren tried to save my sister but he couldn't move his right leg anymore. the police were ready to shoot. "put down your guns, or I'll do something to this girl, that nobody ever forgets" the guy said. "PUT IT DOWN!" I shouted. the polices did. I don't know who, but someone shot the guy on middle of the chest. everyone looked around. Somebody grabbed me from the back and pulled me to a corner. It was suzy and her brother! "shhhh, wear these" suzy's brother qui said handing some damn clothes. they gave me Tokyo ghoul's mask and handed me knifes and guns. We split and the guy holding my sister would not die! One by one we killed half of his team. A police noticed me and I ran the other side. The police who saw me shouted and pointed at me. everyone looked and I was seen. I jumped down the hospital's last floor and I tried many times shooting the guy. The guy attacked and qui distracted him. "oh you lazy poke" qui made fun of him. the guy chased qui like hell. That guy had more members, I lifted my sister and everyone were ready to attack. The police held their guns at me and they were scared. "put the girl down!" all of them shouted. suzy ran in front of me. "don't! we are trying to save her!" suzy shouted. "move aside young lady!" the police shouted. "sis move aside" I said. suzy didn't move from her place. qui came back and pulled suzy. "I'll hand you the girl, but please careful of her. she means a lot to me" I said. my sister stared at me and blushed. I put my sister on the ground and made her stand up. A police shot a bullet in middle of my chest. "NO!" suzy screamed and ran to me. the polices captured the guy and his group and it was left to me and suzy and qui. My eyes were seeing blur and it was hard to see. blood came from my chest. "open your eyes al! Please! don't die!" Suzy screamed and kept on trying to save my life. the girl who helped suzy came out from the hospital, having her cheeks burnt. she looked at me and ran towards me. she ran back inside the hospital and bought some aids stuff. They tried everything on me and it worked. Suzy started crying in happiness.