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Emerald Ocean

{Announcement} Got a notification about being put in some kinda promising books event or whatever which I guess could be considered feedback so I'ma get to work on this book again... Gotta finish that there last arc... My little Gieco Lizard deserves death!!! --- Inside a garden full of towering trees untold years old that sadly have inferiority complexes caused by the never ending giant tower that supports the sky that the garden sits in front. Upon the branch of one of the smallest trees in the garden, the last of it's kind of the tallest it's breed of tree was ever been able to grow as well as the oldest, sits a beautiful fairy who seems but the size of a squirrel emotionless sipping tea watching the leaves fall off the leaves of the tree as if having already given up on life when suddenly a wind passes by the eternally still garden and everything gently quakes as the infinite number of lines along the towers base lights up gently with a blazing emerald flame that is bordering on black. As if struck by a earth quake the woman falls out of her chair unbearably shaking as her eyes lock upon a thing far away in the infinitely large garden not a plant, not a tree, but the ground itself. A crazy and hopeful fire begins to burn deep within the beautiful fairies eyes as reaches out her hand and with a determined look shatters the very core of her soul sending a piece of herself out into the earth and herself tumbling listlessly into a deep sleep alone on the branch. Hope still burning in her eyes even as they slowly close and a twisted smile upon her lips. Like a bolt of lightning the core of her soul that was a part of her soul but not at the same time takes flight towards the sky circling around the crown of the small tree twice before gently bumping into the already sleeping woman as if in sorrow before flashing away faster then the eye could see reaching a distance so far you wouldn't be able to walk it in a million years even if you could travel at the speed of light and diving into the soil of a solitary mound of dirty diving deeper and deeper it eventually stops and flashes so bright it can even be suttly seen from the garden above as the deep blue light like the ocean fuses into the very core of an single solitary atom inside the soil as if slipping through a crack. Across a vast and unending expanse of sky a brilliant flash of blue light up the very core of a universe before zooming away in the exact instant it appeared as if nothing their ever mattered not the massive throne, the unending number of people fighting for it, nor the ghastly little hut that's door has never opened in all of its existence and that space has warped the top of that no eyes made of flesh has ever seen and no man has ever hoped to enter. One, Ten, A Hundred, A thousand, A Million, A Billion, an untold number more stars pass by as they begin to trail together before the light finally find a crack. Not in space, not in time, not in anything but itself simply existing like it's always existed. The space between filled with nothing. Diving into the crack without even slowly down the blue light seems to fade from existence as if it was never there. Slowly but surely as the blue light fades so does the crack before with it's last peek a suttle flash of Emerald escapes being vanishing from sight. The gentle beam of light flew out never stopping till it struck a nearby planet. As the light was absorbed by that planets inhabitants something... Awoke.

Jocom · Fantasia

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Ch.1 Emerald Eyes

As my eyes opened I realized I seemed to hold no form. I looked around frantically but there was nothing but empty space and I seemed to just float as an invisible gas... Or ghost? I'm uncertain what I am or who I am. As I look down in front of the space I awoke there was a floating picture of some sort. It looked like a window but held no real form just like me. As I sat there amazed by the fact I could simply pass through the thing wondering what the thing was suddenly a loud ringing sound went off. I looked down and realized inside the window were a few buttons written in strange characters I couldn't comprehend but somehow knew the meaning of. Written in the window that I had foolishly played with was countless words thousands of names of animals and all forms of living beings. At the top was the words "Choose your path."

On each button there were countless massively powerful creatures and strange things I'd never heard of or seen before each more magical and awesome then the last. At the bottom was the button I had hit by mistake. It had lit up and a strange shape now covered it. I clicked it over and over trying to go back no matter what I did it didn't seem to want to let me change my choice. Staring aghast I lamented my terrible choice. Of all the choices I could have picked, fish, birds, giant lizards, living objects, slimes, dragons, spiders, men, griffins, even gods, countless astonishingly amazing choices... with hundreds of thousands of awesome choices between them that even let me decide the specific characteristics of each why did I have to hit that one. The worst possible option kept ringing in my head over and over as if some ancient god was taunting me with my idiotic choice, laughing at me as I wallowed in self pity. After hours of painfully kicking myself figuratively of course... No feet so no way to actually do it seeing as I'm a incorporeal being. I finally get up and look at the panel once more. Staring at my choice for a few seconds I decided I'll do it. I can't go back now but I sure as hell won't back down from what's already been done. I looked next to my choice and finally noticed there was a next button.

After hitting it a new list popped up. Hundreds of thousands of skills and abilities that are awesome and magical. Before blindly swiping at it I look around then try to cover the window from that damned taunting bastard who doesn't seem to exist outside my head. I scroll slowly and pick each one carefully.

As I scrolled through a specific thing caught my eye. [Level: you will be granted the right to grow as you accumulate experience each act giving a predetermined amount of exp.] I sat there wondering if it was a game or what. Wait... What's a game? Do I have memories? I don't have a name but I know words right? I mean I am having this thought in my head I have to have some sort of language. But I have no eyes ears or brain. How am I taking in information or remembering anything. How do I have emotions? Aren't those all tied to the physical forms hormonal balances? Even if something like a soul exists how can it perceive the world? Where did all this knowledge even come from?

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After I'd finished my somewhat awkward many hour self interrogation I decided to just set it aside for now and to pick the level skill and a sound in my head rung out, like before, this time I heard two of eight decided. After that I continued scrolling through the skills and find many others that sound or seem useful but for some reason it wouldn't let me read most of there specific details. In the end I ended up with [Sight] [Evolve] [level] [Healthy] [Detect] [Regeneration] [light] and wait... I didn't pick that... What the hell. This is just cruel even though I was hurt emotionally by the choice I was unable to make. Now that taunting bastard had to go and pick something just to rub salt in the wound.

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