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Douluo : I thought I was invincible but Shura killed me! shota milf

Autor: Basabaka
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Tang yin had reached the top of douluo continent but he didn't expect when he decided to find a partner he was killed by Shura! but he was Reborn again with a new and strong system come and find out his road to revenge. Ps: don't follow Tang San , don't take Yu xiaogang as teacher, Wuhan Palace will win

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LaziestMan
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well the first five chapter are good I think

LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4LaziestMan

well the author is trying to explain everything in details and it's already been 15 chapter not even one day has passed in fanfic so if he keeps writing like this we will probably get more than a hundred or even three hundred chapters to read [img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=exp][img=exp]

Veany
VeanyLv1Veany

Escreverei em Português (PT-BR) mesmo. Estou achando divertido ler o FF, mas espero que você possa fazer algo que comece estragar a história. Boa sorte!

Basabaka
BasabakaAutorBasabaka

everyone with every 1 0 0 power Stones I might post an extra chaptery

Basabaka
BasabakaAutorBasabaka

just samelessly giving my self 5 star If any one has suggestions for novel please let me know

Basabaka
BasabakaAutorBasabaka

i am sorry if the chapters are from four hundred to six hundreds words

Basabaka
BasabakaAutorBasabaka

if anyone thinks the chapter is small they can just write their own novel to read ok!

AlexPendragon
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Nikolaii
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please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original.... please give me a link to the original....

Basabaka
BasabakaAutorBasabaka

If someone has questions they can ask me

LaziestMan
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Read "Level Up with Pills and Herbs" come and get to know author before he becomes a celebrity in Webnovel

Basabaka
BasabakaAutorBasabaka

please tell me how the novel is progressing and what I should add

Jackleell
JackleellLv1Jackleell

Author, please stop spamming 5-star ratings on your novel to artificially boost its rating. This story is not good; it's lazy, boring, and relies on the same unoriginal systems and easy paths to becoming overpowered

Asta_4626
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Dear Author, artificially inflating your book's ratings with 5-star reviews does not mask its fundamental flaws. The narrative lacks originality and depth, making it a tedious read. The characters are underdeveloped, and the plot relies too heavily on convenient, overpowered solutions. In its current state, this book fails to engage or impress

JakeKing_11
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This story is disappointing due to its unimaginative plot and uninspired character development. The narrative is plagued by repetitive themes and lacks the depth necessary to truly captivate. It falls short of providing a compelling or memorable reading experience. Additionally, the system used in the story seems like a lazy approach to writing, as if it's an attempt to easily profit from patrons

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