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Asta_4626

Asta_4626

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2022-02-24 UnidoGlobal
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  • Asta_4626
    Asta_4626a month ago
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    i enjoyed this fanfic so far keep it up please dont drop this novel. _______________________________________________________________

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46264 months ago
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  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46264 months ago
    Respondeu a HikariAoki

    No, he wasn't. Just read the first few chapters. I think he only killed rich, corrupt people, but I can't remember.

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46264 months ago
    Postado

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  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46265 months ago
    Respondeu a Emptyentity

    Nope, I just checked, and my review is only shadow-banned on this novel. It's still getting replies and likes on my old reviews. I think it's this author who removed my review. It's kind of funny; I've seen authors like this before. They get mad or annoyed about anything bad said about their book. This will be my last and final reply because I don't have time to read a man child's book. Overall, the book is mostly 2 stars. The only good thing about the story is the writing.

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46265 months ago
    Respondeu a _ShiningMoonLight_

    No matter how good AI is, it can never come close to human imagination. Even if AI is good, it cannot come up with something a human can. It will take a predictable path 80% of the time, and you can feel where this story is going. It's boring as hell.

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46265 months ago
    Respondeu a Emptyentity

    why would it be shadow banned i did nottting ?

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46265 months ago
    Respondeu a Avi2112

    um i dont know why it not showing up i did 2 review and who the other guy you keep talking about and no this is not a alt and my only acc

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46265 months ago
    Postado

    The author tends to delete any reviews that point out his mistakes in his writing or novel, and I hope this one doesn't get deleted. I'm hoping to provide a constructive critique that will help him improve. Writing Quality: 3 stars. It's good, but is it just me, or is it annoying for almost every sentence to start with "you"? Stability of Updates: 5 stars Story Development: It's just following the already established lore and adds nothing new to it. 1 star Character Design: Kind of boring. I have no idea about the character; he is bland. All he cares about is sex. I don't mind that, but if this story is all about sex, it will not be for me. 1 star World Background: We already have an established world, so I wouldn't give it 5 stars because it doesn't deserve it. Also, this story doesn't make us feel immersed in the world, so I would give it 1 star.

  • Asta_4626
    Asta_46265 months ago
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    Hi author, why did you remove my review? What did I say that was wrong? And if you're only trying to keep high ratings by deleting every review that doesn't agree with you, it's not only unfair but also disappointing. It's not going to help you improve as a writer