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Cheating gamer in Pokémon world

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What is Cheating gamer in Pokémon world

Leia o romance Cheating gamer in Pokémon world escrito pelo autor Silentfairy publicado no WebNovel. An unfortunate or fortunate? Soul died from mysterious meteor falling across earth yet before his consciousness could dissipate he was swept into Pokémon verse by the literal gods of that universe. Wh...

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An unfortunate or fortunate? Soul died from mysterious meteor falling across earth yet before his consciousness could dissipate he was swept into Pokémon verse by the literal gods of that universe. What was the mysterious meteor? It’s cause? effect? What would happen now that the soul was before the very gods in a rather dubious state? Read on To satiate curiosity To soothe boredom To experience a fantastical adventure And discover the ever familiar yet unfamiliar world!

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Silverfox736
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The idea is good. There are a few mistakes but it Doesn’t interfere with reading experience.the plot has a lot of potential too.im a fan of gamer fanfics so do keep up and don’t drop in the middle lease.

Silentfairy
SilentfairyAutorSilentfairy

I’ll shamelessly give 5 stars to my work. Good or bad i will let you all decide but i gotta give myself a pat in the back for the work done. I want to write a novel however i dont have much experience in this work.so im writing this as a probe to test myself. I welcome any constructive criticism and advice. I hope to get help from experienced readers and writers to better myself.thank you.

Immortal_Orca
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So far it's a pretty good read there's alot of cool ideas you've incorporated into the novel but I feel like some were added just as an afterthought which while not a bad thing, makes them seem underutilized. In terms of writing quality the beginning of the novel was pretty shaky honestly, however there is a stark contrast between chapter 1 and chapter 10 as the quality made a huge jump so you're improving very quickly. As for the characters themselves, it's a bit early to tell but I feel like I can at least get the general feeling of how you want to portray them which is a good start. I don't really know what more to write but in conclusion, although the novel had a shaky start, I think you're very quickly improving your writing and it really shows, keep it up!

Raju4935
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This is an interesting story and fun to read! I love how you develop the pokemons characters. They don't seem like unintelligent pets like other ff.

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