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Build A Family Of Gods

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What is Build A Family Of Gods

Leia o romance Build A Family Of Gods escrito pelo autor BibAsXettri publicado no WebNovel. The Story is about an Medieval Fantasy World where our Mc got Transmigrated and Become an Family Head of a Small Noble Family in an Small Kingdom with an System with which he get Rewarded for giving B...

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The Story is about an Medieval Fantasy World where our Mc got Transmigrated and Become an Family Head of a Small Noble Family in an Small Kingdom with an System with which he get Rewarded for giving Birth to Child with better potential. As he uses his System to develop his Family and gets Stronger and Stronger. From an Baron to an Duke of a Small Kingdom an Then a Duke of a Small Kingdom to a Duke of the Great Empire and From a Duke of a Great Empire to a God of the Word. MC have a Laidback, Carefree and Cautious Personality. He will not risk his Family or Himself for Small Benefit, He Doesn't want to become a King or Emperor because he don't want to work all the time and spend his time with his Children and Wives. English is my third language so there may be some grammatical mistake so hope you don't mind :)

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kanekiUchiha25
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I hope author can speed up the rate at which he updates this novel,I'm willing to contribute one power stone a day as long as the story keeps me interested and I'll let author know when I lose interest,and I hope MC's character is one which is likeable(pls no wanna be hero, who'd willingly sacrifice themselves for someone they just met),well good luck

Spabsta
SpabstaLv14Spabsta

Good story so far. Not a lot of grammar mistakes or anything. Only downside is that the chapters are a bit short but it works as he updates everyday First I’ve seen a book like this.. I look forward to the future and what type of kids he will have. P/S: I hope you diverge a little and get kids from wives that arent human as thats boring no?

Joao_Pires
Joao_PiresLv4Joao_Pires

Liking the story so far. It is the first of this genre that I have read that has potential, and for this app, the quality of the book is pretty high. Writing quality: 3* It is easy to understand what the author wants to express, but there are a lot of problems, such as: - A lot of unnecessary capital letters. - Incorrect sentence syntax. - Paragraphs sometimes split in the middle of a sentence. - Missing words (very rare). - Repetitive sentences (which have improved since I pointed it out in one of the chapters). Story Development: 4* It could be better, but there is a clear progression of the story. If the writing improves, I believe this aspect will become much more impactful. Character Design: 4* I don't give it 5* because we still don't have much information about his wives (except Janice) and kids. Since the author has shown intention to give more value to his family, I think this aspect will be addressed in the future. Updating stability: 5* Very good, almost daily. World background: 4* As it is still the beginning of the story, some information is missing, but the author has been introducing it in a way that doesn't feel like an info dump. To improve the story, the author could consider adding an auxiliary chapter with information known to the general population and other important aspects, such as: - World Map: It can even be created on paint, just to help provide a clear view of the world and assist the author in planning the story's progression, such as mountains, rivers, dangerous places, etc. - Strength Tiers - Characters: With the number of children and wives, it will be important to provide: - Name - Age - Relation with MC - Potential in magic and martial arts - Profession - Strength - Techniques they know

j_the_gamer_yo
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me like 👍 go more or else I find you watch out

HansDojo
HansDojoLv14HansDojo

could you put a synopsis?. it's a good book so far. but a synopsis would draw in more people to read.

infinity758
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like the story author hope you keep up dating and don't drop

DaoistTP0fHy
DaoistTP0fHyLv4DaoistTP0fHy

im willing to give more power stone to this novel as long as there is more chapter i also hope that the mc family can have more lifespan its not good for him to live long while seeing his family die in front of him most of his wife and children dont have his system and talent it won't be good for them to be weak or die before him and thank you for your hard work

pero_gamer
pero_gamerLv4pero_gamer

very good keep writingregular chaptersthe story is very interesting

Tulasa_Baidwar
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A unique nobel, I haven't watch such novel with an interesting concept but the chapters are short i hope u can post it daily[img=update][img=update]

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