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Back to the Beginning...

Autor: burnable
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What is Back to the Beginning...

Leia o romance Back to the Beginning... escrito pelo autor burnable publicado no WebNovel. Harry finds himself thrust into his four-year old body, after Voldemort killed him in the forest in what would have been his seventh year. Knowing what he did, he decided to fix some things he never h...

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Harry finds himself thrust into his four-year old body, after Voldemort killed him in the forest in what would have been his seventh year. Knowing what he did, he decided to fix some things he never had a chance to before. He'd not go into the magical world untrained this time. OP Harry. Science, magic and discovery. Harem.

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Till the last breath

I was holding him for the last time, tears rolled out, every bit of me became still like a glass, a glass so clean that all the memories that I had with him were now gone into the blue of something unknown, it's like there is nothing left like a still-life picture, every tear was making the glass even more clear, the glass that we painted for the past 4 years, with colours full of cheery blossoms, feels like the glass is shattered it's in different pieces crushed so finely, that I can collect them and connect to the place they belong, Avisa someone called my name I looked back and it was Drishya's mother, I went a step back loosen the grip that was only from my side as Drishya was on fairyland and had left me alone with a lot of unanswered questions, I placed my beloved on the bed, he was looking so seren but he's asleep now perhaps he didn't wanna stay here for us, Avisa his  Mumma came next to me " I am sorry my child", you have to move on, she said I'll live for him because I know how much we loved each other, it will always be him, I sighed while wiping my tears, and I came out of the room, I rushed toward my car where I have kept his last belonging, I ran as fast as I can so that I reach my car as soon as possible, tears were rolling through my eyes but I didn't let them take away the spirit I have for my love and maintaining a life he always wanted me to, I'll rebuild the castle alone and with his essences that he has left for me, in all these hustle bustle  I didn't know when I reached to my car, I open it sat on the driver seat and next to me was a guitar, and a  ukelele that he gifted me on our first and second date, Drishya was enlightened by the music he uses to say to me "Avi music gives a magical power, and I feel like I can conquer  everything On this planet, if two of the things are on my side that's you and music"

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Wallker
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It stars off good but soon developed into a drama filled mess of catch the rapist and Dumbledore bashing with a poor harem story mixed in. The main plot is done very quickly with no problems for the MC leaving with a feeling of nothing to look forward to except more of the same drama crap.

kiritoDnamikaze
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Great job again on this fan fic .Its hard to come by such stories with perfect lenth and grammar and character development .I came here after reading the previous one and the magic is still there.

RandomIsGood
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The writing quality is really great and the story is written really well.... However the story's content itsepf is garbage **** and it has really unnecessary bashing of dumbledore I mean a little bit is fine but this story does not just have a little bit of it. The updates itself are okay.... I don't really want to wrote anything else for this review so in general the story is written extremely well but the story itself is really bad

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Cacakman
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Okay. Author is one of the best writer i know in the forum. Even across forums. This novel has potential. Writing style, world building, plot making, character building, and many more one of the best I met so far. The author commitment to end the story is well known. You should check his other book.

Grey1902
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It's fantastic can't wait for more definitely recommend reading it 🐍⚡............................. .. .. . ................ .. . ....

Harem_fan
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HOLY SHIT THIS IS EPIC! I am a fan after just one looooong azz chapter! And most importantly it is a HAREM!...........................................

Rico321
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very good, good grammar is long chapters. for those who do not like to harem the other story of this author has only one romantic pair (It was already complete with 69 caps if I'm not mistaken

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Jasonenrick
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Writing Quality ~5 Stability of Updating ~5 Story Development ~3 Character Design ~2 World Background ~1 Here is my Review: The First two are self-explanatory, like usual! Story Development: The Story is generally really good but we skipped 7 years and a few months in 1 Chapter, seems a bit rushed even when the Chapters are really really long! You could have skipped a few months ever so often and tell what the Mc was doing ! We don't know anything of what happend in the 6 years between Anyway..... And the Telekinese is bull**** ! As If everybody has Telekinese but no one knows of it. It would have been Discoverd long before Harry! It makes No Sense at all. It would be okay If he were the only one to have it but he tells every Person he met how to get it ( close people but he nevertheless tells it nearly everyone he knows). Character Design : Well, I can't see how the Mc is our Harry Potter . The Mc is suddenly intelligent, Scheming etc etc . He is a Gentelman out of nowhere and intends to get a Harem ......the Harry I knew didn't even have the guts to Talk to girl... Then there is Ron, I don't like Ron, mind you but Ron is Harry's friend for 7 years and Harry knows him very well. And Harry suddenly calls Ron " a son of a Bitch" and tells him that he won't Talk to him ever again" And the best is, IT's because the Halloween Event that already happend before in the Life before this . He knew Ron's character ......and he acts like Ron has rape his mother, not like that's possible .... Snape is also written badly, like that's not Snape in any way ! Snape is a calm Person..and not whatever the Snape in this Fanfic is . World Background: It's HP ! Would have been 5 -Stars , I mean what is there to complain about but your Telekinese Made the World Background to 0% Review End! Ps: Keep in mind that I only read to Chapter 2, also English isn't my mother language!

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

LordTiber
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Please dont stop if you can, take it farther ?? .............................................................................................

Truth
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Don't be discouraged for the seemingly small amount of chapters they're humongous and every bit of amazing. A whole new take on the HP world plucked out of a series of What if? He was smarter, he was more ruthless and he was prepared most of all.

Edward_Crockett
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The author definitely writes like a professional! The depth and thought taken, is extremely thorough. I believe this will be on of those fanfics, everybody who reads it will recommend!

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i am giving 5 stars because of the long ass chapters ... recently some novels just to get attention include a trash chapter with 15k words to hype search results and i think that's just plain wrong

Captain_Nemo
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Can't say much about the story rn cause only 5 chapter, but knowing the author's previous work this one would be great too. Just need to give it more time for more chapters to come in.

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Second time reading but it’s always an enjoyable read. Could use an epilogue but it ended just fine for me. But I like oddly specific plot points about world building. Like economic, businesses, etc.

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a very good intake on what the magic in the hp universe could accomplish while most mc go for the world dominion route this one went the explortion and creation route i was always more interrested in the science victory than conquest victory in the civ games so this novel quite hit the spot so GG

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I have read at least 5 times all the fanfictions from Burnable. Top Five author for me :)

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