Assassin's POV in Another World

All right, now let's see. Depending on whether there are readers every day and reading daily then this novel will continue to have chapters, if not then I'll put it on hiatus and that's the end of it. I have enough stuff for this and my other novel, so if you like this novel please keep reading it it will be quite long and at the beginning the chapters will be somewhat short but then already in about 20 chapters they will be long chapters of 2000 to 2500 words. So thank you if you read this. Since I posted this comment, this novel will be contracted by Webnovel within the next 20 hours and that motivated me to write more chapters on the same day.

Really love the story keep posting it please🙏🏻🙏🏻 I belivie this novel can get big af

If you’re planning to read this novel, let me give you a quick update for those who enjoy analyzing logic or simply reading for fun. One thing I didn’t like about this novel is how the MC changes over time. At the start, he’s portrayed as this cold, cool, and detached character. But as the story progresses, he starts trying to change himself. I get that the author is trying to show character development, but it feels inconsistent. If the MC is supposed to be an assassin, shouldn’t he remain cold and hardened, at least for a while? What’s the point of emphasizing his assassin background if he’s not going to act like one? Another issue is the way the MC tries to save some slaves. This isn’t a bad plot point in itself, but it’s poorly executed. The MC deliberately gets himself kidnapped to infiltrate the group and save them, but it’s full of logical inconsistencies. For instance, the MC has mana, yet none of the kidnappers notice it—except for a girl in the same cell. Let me explain the backstory. The MC takes over the body of someone who has recently died. This body was running away from the kidnappers before its death. Here’s where it gets strange: why aren’t the kidnappers questioning how he’s alive again or how he suddenly has mana? In this world, a person’s mana is detectable through their hands, so it should’ve been obvious. The reason the MC wants to save the slaves is because he sees himself in them, which is fine. But the real reason—revealed by the author—is that a princess is among the captives, though the MC doesn’t know this yet. The whole setup feels like a typical cliché: save the beauty, and she falls for the hero instantly without a second thought. Now, the logic behind the escape plan is where things completely fall apart. The MC plans to run away with the captives, but anyone who understands human nature knows it’s not that simple. Some captives are injured, sleep-deprived, or starving. When people are scared, human nature kicks in, and things can turn ugly. Some will betray others to survive, and others might even resort to violence for their own sake. This lack of realism bothers me because the MC is supposed to be an assassin—someone who has seen the worst of humanity. He should understand human betrayal and the complexities of survival. Instead, the author glosses over these issues, making everything too easy. It feels like the author isn’t considering the bigger picture, which makes the story frustrating to read. "Now if you read this far I did use ChatGPT to fix some of my writing but it changed most of my work but it still the same everything is the same but it has a more complex writing that I don’t put in my writing.”

Great story definitely worth a read, although there aren't many chapters at the moment of writing, they are mostly full of individual content that makes each one worth getting.

although story is good but but author really didn't give me the chance to truly get into the story. cz he turned the premium chapters on in 13-14th chapter? Other popular novel give like 40 to chapters for readers to get into the story. very few are gonna spend their money if they can't even get into the story plot properly.