Al-Mos... Quit- to Live A Second Life

The protagonist is somewhat annoying due to being negative, but I like the concept. I like how the story seems realistic despite being fantasy.

I have been reading this book for quite a while now, and I got to say that it is quite interesting. The plot was kinda different from the others and I like it.

Over all its great, but the Main character is really emotional, like somehow he just loses all logic and need to get his anger fixed. I don’t him he’s really…..Crazy and everyone is so emotional, I can’t go through any chapters without seeing guilt and crying, even after a whole days? Week? They don’t change, there’s no character development, and the system…is useless, except for telling information, also the MC yells a lot, I understand he’s panicking and all that, also why does every reincarnator always have to cry but before they both knew each other they didn’t have a problem with trying to kill each other. The Main problem in this novel is, like I said, no character development, but that’s just few chapters from the start. I personally don’t like to be hit with an emotional train wreck every chapters so this is not for me.

This story is quite emotional. It feels like you ride a roller coaster since the protagonist has rollercoaster-like emotions. But I like the story.

The story is good and interesting though, to be honest... there is some problem with the wording. It seems that English is not the native language of the author. But overall, it's a fine story.

Incredible story right off the bat, got enthralled right away and can't wait for more chapters to come out! Author has a great writing style and an interesting concept that he draws on in a unique way.

The story is amazing with an exciting concept of going from species to species and evolving along the way. The very unique premise as far as I can tell, first reading a book like this.

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Nice book, I like your writing style and grammar usage, but for the concept, there is something you need to fix. If you're planning on making a action novel, give a fewer conversation and give more about the action things. That's all :)

Though the grammar could be better, I like the interesting story, plot, and overall concept! The updates are very stable, and the story isn't rushed, which I tend to see in many other novels. I'd really recommend giving this book a try :)

Nice one author✌✌, the plot of the novel is peculiar and different from any other story. The author has a very good writing quality and updates frequently. The story is a very interesting one.