Hello there, my name is Remaker (pen name) and I am the sole creator of the Entiverse. I had a childhood obsession with storytelling and creative writing. I eventually wanted to tell a tale and write
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It felt off in beginning but picked up pace in the third chapter. The humor is good, could leave off words like manga and romcom. Interesting read, would love to see where the story lands, and best wishes to the author.[img=recommend]
dame what an ending, alright, i guess a gotta wait
Wa-wait what. hold on what
The Father sounds more reasonable
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"was an obsidian and golden" what???
rather than going anti with it, you should make it so they don't give anything away, rather they absorbed solar waves or they are just untrackable and you won't know they are there until it's too late.
I pity your MCs, its always one thing after another. Send them on vacation or something.
BRUH, not cool bruh. not a good prank, burh
I can for sure say, it is a response against the attacker, since if it was not the creature would have lept up from the ground attack him, rather then him picking it up.