Finally, after 15 chapters, I'm here to give an introductory review.
First and foremost, you probably need to read 20+ plus chapters before you can develop an opinion about the story.
I wrote it in such a way that the first 15 chapters makes a small volume that has quick-paced action that introduces the power system and the world at large.
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Now let's get to the review.
1) Writing Quality:
- It is one of my best works yet, and I pride myself on having a good writing style. nothing more needs to be said.
2) Updates:
- You are guaranteed at least 5 - 7 chaps a week. I'm looking to increase that to 14 chaps a week, but I will see if I can do that on a regular basis.
3) Story Development:
- This is something I can mention with pride. The story has varying paces. Sometimes, it feels fast-paced, and sometimes, it goes slow.
- It all depends on the current arc and volume. I did that to match the realism of the world.
4) Character Design:
- I can't say it is absolutely phenomenal, but the main cast is lovable. We have Reve, Ren, and Calen, all with contrasty personalities and backgrounds
5) World Background:
- Another phenomenal world-building from me. Yes, I said that
- The world of Earth is riddled with cosmic horror and diabolic influences. This characteristic has seemingly weaved itself into the power system and the ways of the world.
We have cults, religions, and factions all vying for control of the world. We have a past covered in mystery. And we have abilities that are not the usual like the first ability we are introduced to stop the target's body with just sight.
Now, it might seem regular but the execution makes it very much different.
I took inspiration from various horror works like Lord of the Mystery, Lovecraftian Mythos, and many more.
One thing I have to say is to take ur time when reading. I guarantee it will be worth it
