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It's really well done, I started reading it with a little apprehension and now I can only say I need more chapters lol. Loved that the beginning horror was the shining and the interaction with the hotel. Also love how it seems batman is going to become fear itself

+1

Superboy prime is near immune to magic as well, because the dimension that he was originally from did not have magic so it's not really a dumb answer

Not true, it clearly states "the user can only control things that have been previously touched." it doesn't say with his hands, I guess that's also a limit Shiki had after he lost his legs

I really like it, its one of the better TWD stories I have read, he is not OP and the system is consistent, the interactions betwen the characters are also good and the story is taking a good direction, can't wait for more chapters.

I am not against using AI to write but when you don't even proof read you get this types of error, having the same chapter repeated, earlier chapters referencing outcomes shown in later chapters like if they had already occurred. Other than that your character design needs a lot of work he is too machine like and is not explained how the system is helping him, you could have done it without the system and still get the same result

I can totally picture him saying this lol

It is one of the best pokemon fanfic i have seen, it is great seeing a smarter ash that learns from his counterparts, and not waste opportunities catching great pokemon. We can even consider this universe and alternative universe to the one from the anime