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Zephyir

Zephyir

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2017-11-12 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
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    I would also hope that our dear author can perhaps update the story more frequently, especially with this novel getting more and more traction hopefully as its simply a hidden gem waiting to be found. However, I do understand that the author may have various outstanding events going on irl so best of wishes to you!

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Posted

    A fantastic novel so far, with an exquisite writing quality that simply adds wonders to the story. I do have some problems with how the MC acts: I am somewhat mindful with how the MC just lets the current pull him along somewhat, even though he already has other tasks at hand. However, that small gripe aside, his reactions to the situations at hand are, imo, pretty apt, which is also topped off with the hilarious reactions and thoughts he has with the many events going on. The other characters that have been introduced so far are also rather comforting to read about as they seem rather realistic in their reactions and actions to the MC and events around him and themselves. Definitely a big recommended to read through. [img=update]

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Commented

    I think there might be a typo here on the 7th line. It should be just ‘’had’’ instead of ‘’was had’’ ? Pardon me if I was incorrect. [img=recommend]

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Commented

    Possibly 3 chapters in one day !? Say no more.

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Commented

    Lets gooooo! The maiden voyage has finally reached its peak!

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapters. Hope you get well soon! [img=recommend]

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Commented

    Setting aside the awesome start to this fight, I can’t stop laughing cause I keep imagining Bob the builder in a jojo-esque style battling the MC. Great work as always👍

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Posted

    A fantastic piece of work from Author-san. A marvelous concept storywise. Although the pacing seems to be quite slow compared to some other stories I've read so far, Author-san has done an amazing work using it to give the readers a detailed, in-depth look into the characters' interactions, relationships, and machinations of our seemingly impassive and calculative MC. The interactions between the characters also feel quite natural and realistic. The only slight criticism I have is about the grammar. There's usually some misplacement of pronouns or other tidbits during most chapters, and some descriptions of the characters' interactions that just feel a bit wrong detracting from the story, but otherwise it's quite good. I recommend using Grammarly if you don't already. It effectively and efficiently aids in helping fix grammar mistakes and also allows you to learn from them properly. It's also free which is always a plus. Moreover, personally, I'm somewhat sad it doesn't seem to be a harem-type story so far but hey, that's just me. It would be quite interesting to possibly have a side-story or development where all the girlfriends that the MC has helped, remember him for it or whatnot. However, Author-san may possibly have some plans regarding this already. That aside, I'm definitely enjoying the read so far. I can't wait to see how Author-san develops this since it has so much potential and they're absolutely smashing it so far. Keep up the good work Author-san, you have my support! [img=recommend]

  • Zephyir
    Zephyir3 years ago
    Posted

    An absolutely fantastic read, that always has me wishing that the fabled time for an update would come ever faster. A concept that utilizes your generic and common tropes in this style of a story and then takes it high heavens with its masterful story-telling. I wasn't much a fan of a first-person narration before. This, however, completely changed my outlook on things. The characters are well-written, the stories well fleshed out leaving me a happy and content reader. Well, shy of an even faster upload schedule but I guess perfection takes time to write, and I'm willing to wait. Definitely recommended! [img=recommend]