I'm a simple person. Open to criticisms. If readers makes critics about something in a novel, i try to find and give explanations about that to make the novel more enjoyable for them and other readers.
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yes but the mc of the game and not our mc xD
But it was said that julia was the first candidate to the main protagonist ethan. not our mc, so until this point it is not cliche for us, but for the game. 😆
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well since he was more tired he would take longer to defeat the robots i think 🤔
nice one. Making the hair color match the name makes it easier for us to associate the person with the name 👌👍
actually its quite the opposite. the shorter a weapon is the less strength the swing ill have. its basic physics, you just have to take lavarage on gravity and the weapon weight.
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actually he is partially right. i have never had a opportunity to experience a full eclipse in my country, and in a few millennia it wont be possible too. there are places that the sun wont even appear, so relatively speaking i agree with him.
oh keep this thinking and the novel gets more enjoyable. I used to find explanations for the authors before, and explained it for others, makes every novel better this way 🤗 dunno if you are right but i thank you for explaining for the others anyways 🤗🤗