This chapters been getting shorter each passing day.Try to keep them in the same length if possible otherwise a lot of people will be fed up to see a fight be stretched in so many chapters.

You lost me in this one.Too complicated mixing 2 worlds and sorry i just dont want to dive dipper.

Abandoned this book here.Everything was going so well.Even the weak mc was just so good but u had to do a gender bender yuck most disgusting of all.

Thank you i had a nice time reading all of this novel. To be honest i didnt know it was already finished but im glad i get to finish at least one of the one i liked.Great job author.

And another good novel going down the drain for such obvious plot hole.It was nice while it lasted.Sorry will be removing this one from my library.

Chapters becoming more and more short.Sorry will be removing this one from my library.

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Thank you for the chapter. Can we have 1 more chapter today? I have this soundtrack im listening 🎶 and its perfect for the upcoming fight. Finally a worthy opponent, their battle will be legendary.

It started out good and with lengthy chapter. But now u can sum up each new chapter with a single paragraph. To much info when it can be shortened to fit the narrative and the chapters are just way to short compared to the first ones when it started releasing.

It started out good and with lengthy chapter. But now u can sum up each new chapter with a single paragraph. To much info when it can be shortened to fit the narrative and the chapters are just way to short compared to the first ones when it started releasing.

just ignore it and write ur ff. they jump too fast on conclusion. when will u be back after this break?

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This one above said it all.