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Pretty fun, keep up the good work! You do make some mistakes such as somewordsnothavingspaces, and some minor grammar mistakes - which mean nothing imho. Plot-wise, character-wise and any-other-wise it's awesome. Thanks!
Bro you really have a knack for writing comic scenes, whole thing up till now was awesome. You only need to get a PR at this point for small grammar mistakes, otherwise it's perfect. Keep up the good work!
Honestly it's good that you got rid of it, but instead of Grindelwald, you could've made some fate-like encounter with a god or sth, maybe death not liking the weapon itself. Grindelwald, while stronger for sure, still shouldn't have come close to stopping this. I think you're massively raising power levels for both dumbs and grinder if you leave it like this?
These are the facts from previous paragraphs: -He has a twin brother. -He can't remember his brother's face. -He has an older brother and a little brother. -He has a good memory and can remember something like 1 yr 2 mnth 1 wk 3 days. (Quite a few contradictions in paragraphs above author bro, maybe take a look, but dw I'll keep going) And of course fire nation attacks. <3
btw, you can try using chatgpt for this maybe? E.g. write what you want him to say, and ask gpt to make some kind of rhyme with it.Modern solutions 😁
I couldn't figure out whether you were translating or creating your own story with the pace you are going at, but whatever it is - I love your consistency and quality!I don't have any suggestion really, love everything so far, just wanted to let you know 👋👌
He shared his intrusive thoughts
I lost too many braincells already:3 adios
It's a pretty nice read, much better than it's current rating. I usually give a try to any novel with decent grammar(this one qualifies). As with any fan-fic, you always have to close one eye on some details - author's touch, but up to this point(ch ~90) it's rather enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work author!