CoffeeFreak

I've re-read this a few days ago. You really did a great job, you got lots of talent. Thanks for writing!

To Morrow 😅

Should be 2.5, right? Dont think cassian transmigrated/started teaching earlier than this, or i mixed something up

ro dah!

I don't remember we had a system inventory introduced? I thought he bought a backpack or something to hold the stuff

Awesome work, loved it. Thanks for writing for so long! For those curious, there are many grammar mistakes, but it's nothing unbearable. Would love if you got someone to proofread and fix it. Characters are really nice and fleshed out, and the story is great! Towards the end it was a bit drawn out, but nothing can really decrease my opinion about it. Good job!

Pretty fun, keep up the good work! You do make some mistakes such as somewordsnothavingspaces, and some minor grammar mistakes - which mean nothing imho. Plot-wise, character-wise and any-other-wise it's awesome. Thanks!

Bro you really have a knack for writing comic scenes, whole thing up till now was awesome. You only need to get a PR at this point for small grammar mistakes, otherwise it's perfect. Keep up the good work!

Honestly it's good that you got rid of it, but instead of Grindelwald, you could've made some fate-like encounter with a god or sth, maybe death not liking the weapon itself. Grindelwald, while stronger for sure, still shouldn't have come close to stopping this. I think you're massively raising power levels for both dumbs and grinder if you leave it like this?

These are the facts from previous paragraphs: -He has a twin brother. -He can't remember his brother's face. -He has an older brother and a little brother. -He has a good memory and can remember something like 1 yr 2 mnth 1 wk 3 days. (Quite a few contradictions in paragraphs above author bro, maybe take a look, but dw I'll keep going) And of course fire nation attacks. <3