Templin

I'm glad you like it

thanks so much

I'm glad you like the direction it's taking

Time for the self obligatory five-star review. Because of course, why not. if I'm not going to give it a perfect score then who will? But in all honesty, I do believe its the best book I've written, and I've done six of those. so give it a try, I absolutely recommend!

No, like: What the actual hell?!

ya welcome

His writing quality is actually off the charts. in all the chapters I read, there was no typo! maybe I didn't pay attention, but there was none. the story develops fast, and that's is something most time loops overlook, and it makes others bland and basic. This is fast, yet grounded. But that probably has to do with the fact that it starts from a veteran's POV and not a newbie. Atlas as a character is just awesome. He is like a grimmer version of sunny– not to say they are similar– and knows when to joke. doesn't just put it anytime. and I value jokes so much. he updates every day, sometimes twice, so the updates are good. and the background world just keeps getting bigger and bigger. not rushed, just like nature supposes it. Peak five stars !!! 🌟

If the chapter had a question mark, it would be nice, would make a lot of sense.

In Matthew mind: "what is that I smell? BLOOD!"