NormalRock

I really enjoyed this book even tho I know nothing about genshin impact, hope you continue writing this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey there, the concept is cool and is actually a pretty cool story, but the grammar was pretty bad and the conversations in general were either cut and dry or just bland, someone would say something for a couple sentences and the reply would just be "ok", no thoughts on it or anything else, and if there were thoughts they were pretty short and bland, there are some other things but I dropped it after a culmination of reading these things, anyway I hope you can improve if you read this auther and I hope that you give it a try after you read this too by the way, it was really interesting. Hope you have a nice day

ultrakill

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