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Dee was not there to witness their fight so why would he even say this?

His sacred light is supposed to be a fusion of holy light+ natural energy (chapter 173), shouldn't it be of a higher quality than what the mutated spider thought it was and in turn be more effective? I think the author forgot this detail and then he forgot it got to level 2 after absorbing the flower he got from saving the fairies' village, after he killed and absorbed the mutated spiders core his sacred light was supposed to be at level 3 yet he claimed it evolved from level 1 to 2. now after absorbing the boss core it evolved from 2 to 4 when it should be level at level 5, now people are in the open world at level 9 when it was stated repeatedly that only at level 11 can the leave the novice villages? is this the same author who was proudly calling himself a maths nerd?

this is a major plot hole, inorder to allow this man to remain inside the building undetected by the system the author made vikram leave after only searching Lucas and his lackeys corpse. what about territory storage? what about getting the territory core? why did he leave without taking it? the upgrade rate of his territory core is severely lacking and he barely puts any effort into getting more territory cores, also when others gather territory cores to upgrade their own does that single territory core count as multiple cores? what benefits do ordinary survivors get from upgrading their territory cores? their were 8billion people which means 8 billion cores, in Vikram region there were originally 100,000 people it got reduced then after a merger it increased to 100,000 again. in his region alone there should be atleast 150,000 cores yet so far he's gotten less than 200 cores I think

since you asked for opinions here's mine, the names of the treekins/druids/sprouts are horrible. come on man you named a male treekin thats a phantom assassin phanty, the name phanty is the same as fanty which is short for Fantasia a females name. and watery sounds even worse as a name. the only 2 with good names are Stella and glacia. im not asking you to go back and edit your chapters to change the names, how about you write a chapter where the treekins having realized how simple their names are and how glacia and Stella are the only 2 with well thought out names ask Vikram to give them new names?

why is tiamant still level 1 after eating a level 70 boss's core? why hasn't the mc experimented with feeding his summons soul cores after learning monsters can level up this way?

also too many details are skipped for plot convenience that makes no sense, Lucians class as a solar mage is revealed the moment he is introduced to the story to highlight the fact that he counters the mc, everyone knows his class yet not once is the rank of his class mentioned..... Helen's class and class rank are never mentioned all we know is she is a fire affinity mage but not her exact class..... jayden is basically the same...... mira's exact class name and class rank being undisclosed makes sense since she's like zich who's secretive

There are 2 major flaws in the story: 1. the power scaling is terrible, you have a level 4 or 5 slime doing damage to level 20+ individuals, it would be one thing if it was a commander rank summon but its only a common rank 2. inorder to hide the powerscaling flaw the auther basically never tells the levels of the MCs opponents, especially human opponents we saw jayden lose to Lucian but we dont know if they are even at the same level. we are told Lucians level is higher than the mc but not how much higher. not a big issue but calling him a myth breaker only to clarify that he's the first person to beat a nullborn in the last 10 years greatly devalue the accomplishment, if its something thats been done before and only around 10 years ago then its not as significant as you are trying to make it seem other than these its a good novel, i like the mechanics of his class

the government controls the portals to the sovereign realm? a wife can gain a territory after divorce? what is up with this writing? isnt the territory linked by the soul how is access to it controlled by the government? the mc says he wont name the territory after his name because he doesn't want others knowing its his land, then he goes and bring out t2 and t3 corpse as if thats not gonna give his identity away this is why I hate transmigration novels where the mc is some modern guy who read transmigration novels. this is something generic that anyone who had read one of those novels would not do, especially when the government can deny access to the sovereign realm and he has a system that upgraded his core which he has to keep hidden. I hope ai wrote this

most of the story is just useless dialogue between him and the system, there is basically no story progression in the first 100 chapters. at the start he seemed excited to learn about mana but basically put in zero effort after awakening, he spend like a month doing nothing and only 1 day before school started practicing swordsmanship he needs to learn runic language inorder to learn spells yet neither him nor his grand parents put in any effort into him actually learning, instead they gave some bs excuse for him to wait until he enters the academy. the elf girl has a curse on her and the grand parents don't even mention it all to the Mc all they did was say they'd see how it would turn out the entire story up to chapter 89 is just the author fishing for word count, no better than the authors who mention smirks, glinting glasses repeatedly

chapter 99? when will you start releasing more? of all you novels this one is probably the least exciting but it's stable and overall is the most suitable one for a anime adaption, you really shouldn't give up on it maybe another 50 chapters and people would start appreciating I more