Argintum_So2

It's a very good story with a lot of potential. It's strange, of course, to hear about different divine powers in the world of demon slayers, but nevertheless very good fanfiction. Dear author, I advise you to include in your work the capture of the entire world and the capture of supernatural forces from it, as well as improving the power of the demons themselves of the highest rank and increasing their number. I would also like the author to include in his work a multiverse where gg will look for all the ways to become stronger.I would also like to suggest worlds to visit in the future, for example, the world of one piece, campione, Naruto, bleach, marvel, DxD, Overlord, or any cultivator with a high ceiling. Since our main character does not have the power to break through the barriers of Worlds, and also does not own the system, then you can use the artifacts of his world! For example, Stonehenge would be suitable. In general, it would be interesting, and most importantly, gg has great potential because he can not only acquire their memories by devouring people, but also the power of the bloodline! In short, the author is very much asking and praying mc in the multiverse, he is the type of character who is interesting to watch, he is not a snotty saint who helps everyone and he does not have the so-called hero and chivalry syndrome, he is a typical villain who will do anything for his evolution and ambition! I hope you'll listen. Please tell me whether to wait for him to travel to other worlds or not.

I wish I could give you five stars, but I can't raise my hand. To be honest, when I saw the word Dark in the tags, I thought that mc, being the King of Demons, would follow a similar path as muzan, but no! I don't know why the author did this, but he was reborn as a Progenitor with great potential, but for some reason this potential is not being used. It's just that the author needs to put something like the righteous tag or similar in the tags instead of Dark. Seriously, he's the progenitor, instead of riveting his subordinates to look for ways to overcome the sun, he tried to unlock the hidden potential of his new body and bloodline. He spends almost every day working hard, training. No, don't get me wrong, I don't mind training, but when you read about the demon king, you want to read about the demon king, not about a saint in the skin of a demon. Seriously, I don't know who likes this. Maybe it's just because it's just started, but personally, mine hasn't gone down yet. of course, I will periodically look in And see if it has changed, if not, then unfortunately this work will not suit me, and the concept itself and the first world are ideally chosen!

I fully support the two psychos should be together, especially since they complement each other and the mc can completely forget about Lily. In general, if there is a romantic line by Samael, then dear author, write it with Juliana!

a very cool novel! I don't really feel like romance myself, but it's written very well here! I ask the author to feel sorry for our mc villain and give him a girl Like the main character Lily. I doubt that a normal person would want to date our villain, so having a relationship with Julie would be fun!

Very good job. One of the best advice is not to abandon, well, and give the mc a little more time at least until 2008 The job is great, super, don't give up.

a very promising book. It is made according to the type of the God of Wisdom, but with its own twist, if the author had released more often, the price would not have been the same, I hope that the MC will focus on more important things than romance. In general, good luck and patience to the author. Good job!

it would be nice if the author could joke. I have read 8-7 chapters, it is not possible to read, those who gave a high rating, I am very sorry you have no taste. There are few, if any, funny moments. The author has problems with comedy, because all the jokes he writes are nonsense, and I don't know who will find it funny. It's also worth working on the dialogues. It's a nightmare, and it's impossible to understand until you're completely drunk. My wish to the author is to write more serious Works because he will be able to do it better. I would even recommend taking this Backstory, but changing it a bit and making it serious. And the last one is not funny, It's Pure chaos, I don't understand who can read it and who likes it.

Great job, that's all I can say. I've read up to chapter 28, so far I like everything. A request to the author from a humble reader, do not remove the dragon's instincts and do not make him more human, rather make him more of a dragon than a human. It would be interesting to read about a super stingy "man" who will fight for every gold piece and kill everyone who steals his treasures. That's it.

not bad fanfiction, I would even say good, but as for me, the author needs to devote more time to mc, and although the story is just beginning, our mc has become a force, but compared to creatures in space, he is a weakling and cannon fodder, albeit at a high level. Dear author, please tell us more about magic, etc. Even now it can be compared to the whole universe, but I think magic can surprise and at least give him more opportunities, as well as the fact that he travels through different worlds and universes , as for me, it is necessary to take away interesting forces besides souls , and although I understand which is already very difficult to write at the moment, because our mc is almost omnipotent, but please let him start using the laws more often. Also, please ask the author to come up with a normal name Mc, otherwise void is not very cool for me, but not very much, as a person who reads this with a translation from English to Russian, I say it's a real trifle to come up with a name for a demon. It's also worth giving go more interesting slaves, and as for me, a little more cruelty to him, otherwise sometimes he does shit that makes me want to cry tears of blood. I understand that the author wants to diversify the plot and not make the mc completely cold and aloof From everything , but the mc should not be made stupid. He could have avoided some problems if he had shown great cruelty , but there's nothing to be done about it , so to speak, it 's the author's will , as well as about the gods and I would like you to explain the difference in their powers, Their + and their - as far as I understand, there is an energy of faith and I would see if mc could create faith in himself and become a god? Anyway, I've given the author a couple of ideas here, so let him decide for himself. In general, come out with chapters more often and I'll definitely finish reading the whole top! The author also holds on to good inspiration.

It's not a bad fanfiction with an idea similar to the lord, but as for me, I need to open up the world more, work with the characters, make them less flat, give them character. To reveal more about the game he played about the kingdom, it's also worth working on the character of the Main Character. Let's just say it would be interesting to follow the humble protagonist, who has almost no flaws, and power does not spoil him. It will be an interesting story if the main character is not perfect, but with his own problems. for example, arrogance or some other qualities. A person who did not have power before , and then suddenly has power, cannot remain the same person. It is also worth revealing more about magic. Our main character does not use magic, but only skills, that is, he will learn how to use magic, he will become stronger, maybe not much, but it will add a variety of attacks. Revealing the magic would be interesting. I also ask the author to work on the mind of the main character's opponents, I understand our MC hero, but some victories will only bring boredom. Make sure that His Opponents are also smart, otherwise he kills the best adventurers and marshals of the kingdoms somehow quickly. I'm also thinking about other worlds, too, because now he He knows that there are other worlds and it is a sin not to take advantage of this. in general, Istria is not bad, there are pros and cons, there is something to work on, but most importantly, I hope the author listens and makes the story even better, as well as explain the MC's actions, his plans and everything else, we will add more specifics.