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You've improved enough.

Support for the author!!! It's interesting to see this novel because it shows how much you've improved compared to the past!! This novel by Evelyn really has seen an incredible improvement, since Evelyn's writing is smoother and more polished! Congratulations on the improvement 😇

A little advice!! Increase the descriptions of the characters' feelings a bit! It's good as it is, but a little extra emotion would be perfect!!

I really enjoyed it, I came here on the recommendation of our sweet and ridiculous Lady Galaxy!! I've been following her for a while and she's undoubtedly a great author, so I thought her recommendation was good and decided to read it and 👍 (By the way, I don't normally read with this account so my reading hours are zero, which is a shame!! But I read everything and I liked it!!! It has good tension in some parts that are just right!!!

is a fascinating work that immerses the reader in a unique and engaging world. The narrative combines elements of fantasy and action with a dose of mystery, creating a plot that captures the reader's attention from the beginning.

Is goood. s

People who are going to read this work, I recommend continuing until much later, the work starts a little confusing but improves as it goes on and I can confirm that the improvement, although slow, is noticeable in future chapters.

This work is DIVINE, it is possibly one of the best works on the subject, She is Dark and delivers on that, something I like is that the author does not forget things, there are things that appeared in a chapter and later on they prove to be useful or complement another explanation, simply an incredible work!