One_Autumn_Cicada

It was quite good. But I have one piece of advice for the author. Your writing style and quality are not bad at all; they're actually quite good compared to most. Don't degrade your work by putting AI-written or AI-refined content in your work. Though your use of AI was most probably very little, it made it even more glaring. It felt to me like chapters with less important content were at least refined by Al, but you wrote the major chapters yourself. There are two distinctive writing styles in there: one quite natural, flows smoothly. The other rigid and very efficient. So efficient that it feels dry and unnatural

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I expected more substance; unfortunately, Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God suffers from extreme structural stagnation. After 1,700 chapters, the primary takeaway is just how punishingly repetitive the cycle is. The conflict is circular—"butt-poking" antagonists and "bully big brothers" exist only to be beaten black and blue in an endless loop. An antagonist provokes the MC, gets crushed, returns with a "big brother," and gets crushed again. This happens four or five times per character before a new one appears to restart the loop. ​The "deus ex machina" is also heavy here. The author conveniently drops a hidden quest or a legendary item into the MC's lap exactly when a pinch arises. While there is some attempt to layer these handouts to make them feel earned, it only works for an unseasoned reader. For those of us used to high-tier world-building and character growth, these "backroom dealings" feel hollow. ​Another major issue is that the author forces the MC to make stupid choices (Like, he clearly has skills that can literally make a fight a thousand times easier, but no, the author makes him chew on rocks when he has ribeye steak in front of him.) just to prolong fights, making them appear more tedious simply to justify a sense of achievement. If you’ve read Overgeared, the lack of character depth and world-building here will be glaring, even if you loosen your criteria by a wide margin.

SATISFACTION!!! I BET THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GONNA BE EVEN MORE SATISFYING!!!

486,332 times? I pity you ppl for your ignorance. 🤣 🤣

I'm getting quite confused by this translation. It doesn't feel like machine translation; rather, it seems done by someone who isn't very good at English. 🙄

This feels like feeding a begger, letting him poop in your toilet, cleaning the mess yourself and even paying the begger for his time at the end, all in the name of righteousness. 😵

Where can I get a job like this that gives a $200k year-end bonus? 😭 😭

Guys, I think there are nameless ones irl too. Last night I was playing games on my PC, that's the last thing I remember. But this morning, I woke up on my bed with a blanket over me. 😱 😱 😱

I'll be back in 2 weeks when the chapters are all stacked up and ready to read together.