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Ah, Siersha already knew he was him?

what is happening? Why is the system also batshit crazy and going against the MC

Just finished the end of the 1st game honestly, I loved every part of it. considering the bulk of the characters, it's understandable that you can't flesh out every character. but I am disappointed in how you treated Elona as fuel for the MC hatred. There is nothing wrong per say, but of how major she was, I wanted at least some sort of funeral or an epilogue for the MCs' thoughts on Elona, cus we just went straight to the Prelude for the 2nd game. Another character is Louisa. She wasn't flesh out enough sadly as well to be worth mourning, even with her quick flashback

Mcs is not really likeable. The author portrays his nonchalanct, and the melancholic attitude doesn't really strike me. One chapter tries to humanise him with a tragic backstory, but it's too short, and it didn't really convey anything at a deeper level. Romance is honestly borderline, not there