Dochermit

give up the stupid sideline story you came up with f****

can we stop with all the nonsense chapters already

okay I got to admit at first I was kind of sketchy about his best friend but that little leech is definitely amusing also at first I didn't like Sue at all but she's turning around not being so bad we'll see in the future

so why is this story all of a sudden more focused on all the background characters and it is on the main character cuz the last 12 chapters there's only been in total maybe one full chapter that the main character has been involved quit f****** around with our money write it right or stop writing and get a job I'm

yeah honestly the gravity room he used earlier he was doing 40 times now he's having a difficulty with five and the fact that he has enough power to punch with over 200 tons means he could do a thousand times what he's doing now and still not break a sweat and on top of it before the girls ate the mushrooms he was punching at 75 tons or round he gained $35,000 tons by the backlash of the contract meeting he should be at 115 tons not 200 tons seriously dude just a piece of advice don't put any numbers in because really your math is

honestly this pathetic excuse of special training camp is b******* it's pathetic at best I mean I can understand anything by competitions and stuff like that but this this isn't a training camp it's truly pathetic that this is this writer's idea of a training camp honestly they're there for a month which is taking out of their training time most of which won't be able to train at all because of the stupidity of this training camp the idea of it is absolute trash

okay I got to admit the idea of him not having to scatter together resources as much it's a good idea too many of these cultivating stories revolve around getting said things veering away from their storyline

very poorly started off I mean who's the main character who's in it you literally started off mid sentence absolutely terrible

these are by far the worst fight scenes I have ever seen absolutely pathetic since you're more interested in all the background talk why don't you go right the little girly drama

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah so busy s*********** and so it interested in what all the random f****** people in this dumb pathetic trash story has to say I mean multiple chapters of them going back and forth random f****** people you'll never hear from again just how stupid are you