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Rafael_Gutierrez_7881

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  • Rafael_Gutierrez_788121 days ago
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    At first I thought it was cool, but then some things stopped making sense. For example, the cultivation techniques are totally irrelevant. The Cauldron Eater is irrelevant. The character development is kind of vague. All the antagonists are the same. As are the characters who interact with Fang Lin.

  • Rafael_Gutierrez_788121 days ago
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    Maybe Dugu Nian is just that essential companion, like in the other novels, with tools like the conversation system, the spirit sword, the talking mystical pet or just avoiding the development of the other characters and only vaguely developing the characters that orbit around the protagonist. I think that's ruining the work. For example, they could have Dugu Nian separate from the MC for personal reasons other than for the purpose of benefiting the MC himself as eternal support. At a given moment at least in that situation he begins to feel feelings for another person, which would make the novel more natural. They are really doing the last Coca-Cola in the desert.

  • Rafael_Gutierrez_788122 days ago
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    Honestly, what Dugu Nian did was ridiculous, as was the reaction of the teacher and the main character. Dugu Nian used a power to attack the soul and everyone praised him, but if he had been a little more powerful, maybe he could have put his enemy into a vegetative state... the adversary is right. He did not take away Dugu Nian's cultivation and at the same time his last attack was justified.