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Millycheick

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2024-11-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Millycheicka month ago
    Replied to RadiantPen

    So what language do you speak?

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Posted

    I really enjoyed the story; it was very captivating, especially with the pain of betrayal and the development towards improvement. I liked it, and I also hope to see the sequel. I would also like to hear your opinion on my novel The Mages of the Zodiac.

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Replied to RadiantPen

    Oh, your dialect is French?

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Commented

    I loved your novel, especially since I really enjoy stories with a civilization-style setting. I was intrigued, and I also hope to get your opinion on my novels: Between Shadow and Light, Grimoire, and The Zodiac Mages.

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Posted

    I really enjoyed the story and I hope to get the next part soon! I noticed some spelling mistakes, but I’m not sure if they come from the translator or if they are actually in the text. Either way, it’s an excellent novel! I especially liked how the protagonist, who once made others tremble, is now the one being hunted. Truly, hats off to you! I’d also love to hear your thoughts on my novels Between Shadow and Light and The Zodiac Mages.

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Posted

    I really loved your novel; it captivated me. How a gentle person became so ingenious was fascinating. The beginning, where the girl had to adapt, and especially the part where she became disconnected from reality, turning into a shadow-like figure, was very well thought out. You skillfully depicted the difficulties and indifference that women face due to being considered weak because of their gender. I truly enjoyed it. I also appreciate having your opinion on my novels: Between Shadow and Light, The Zodiac Mages, and The Legend of the Grimoire.

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Posted

    I really enjoyed your novel; it's captivating, and the fast-paced battles are something I truly appreciate. However, the atmosphere is sometimes a bit too gloomy. Adding a touch of dark humor here and there could help lighten it up. Also, some explanations could be clearer. For example, when Aria first told the story, I had trouble understanding it, and it wasn’t until the second explanation that everything made sense. But overall, I loved your novel! I’m also looking forward to your thoughts on La Légende du Grimoire, Les Mages du Zodiaque, and Entre l’ombre et la lumière, as well as La Destinée d’une Reine. Feel free to share them with your friends so they can check them out and leave their thoughts—I’ll do the same for you!

  • Millycheicka month ago
    Commented

    tout ce que je peux dire et que ton roman m'a capitivé j'aime se trouble que tu as créé dans Histoire je viens juste de le commencer mais j'en ai déjà dévorées premier page tellement c'est captivant