Oreanaru

Masterpiece

Very good, progression a bit slow at the beginning, but it's interesting, the author develops the OCs well, and the story is moving in a very interesting way, different from the canon, and the author is handling it very well, but changing the canon too much can easily make it bad, don't abandon it.

Very good, some people complain about his hand, but I think it makes it more interesting, more diverse. The story progression is good, don't abandon it.