SleepyyCraft

first of all this is amazing, I like the plot and how it is moving so smoothly, those small details really keep the story alive and yes writing style is top notch you can easily connect with characters, how they are feeling at that moment fear, anxious, it's beautifully captured by the author, i loved it please update more xD it's 10/10 all together.

a very good beginning and introduction of VRMMORPG concept, writing style is good very easy to comprehend, can't wait for Lucent's journey. super excited.

a very promising start, it hooked me from the very first chapter, concept is very good, I like the flow of conversation between characters, 10/10

intresting!! concept is very good and with those small details you can feel that the world is alive, got me hooked on the chapter one, can't wait to read more.

it's amazing 10/10 recommend, i loved the introduction of your plot it started as fun and games and now suddenly he became master, whats more intresting is writing style it's impressive, keep it up.

Hey everyone, Author here! I hope you're enjoying Ren's adventure so far. Feel free to share your feedback - it'll help me improve and make the story even better!

this is so interesting, please do continue to update, everything is just perfect, i like the magic and sci fi genre combination also, can't wait to see how will this unfold.

read the first chapter, i like the premise of the story.