Pirulitinho

No, I’m not familiar with the original version. To be honest, I’m not really a fan of reading those original works in Chinese. I’ve been disappointed too many times: you read and read—spending two or three days getting halfway through the story—only to see it all turn into a horrible mess. Then you realize you wasted all that time reading something terrible, haha.

Tell me, why should I read it if the synopsis itself practically gives away the whole story? He’s going to transmigrate into *Bleach* in Zoro’s body, unlock all three types of Haki, gain Zoro’s swordsmanship skills, and fight Kenpachi—a fight where Kenpachi will claim his swordsmanship is inferior. That’s kind of weird, though, because Kenpachi doesn’t really have a sword technique; he just slashes and slashes—it’s pure instinct, even if Yamamoto did teach him a bit of *Zanjutsu*, lol. Then something happens—maybe a battle, or maybe someone teaches him a difficult technique that he masters incredibly fast—and because of that, Yamamoto calls him a talent without precedent. Eventually, he gets strong enough to surpass the limits of a Shinigami, and Aizen finds out... Am I wrong about any of this? Sorry for the rant; I just wanted to get this off my chest, lol. It’s just that I’m so tired of finding fanfics where the synopsis practically gives the whole story away, lol.

Let me ask you something: Mikael gains the "baby Cthulhu" form with tentacles. At what point does he lose this form and transform into the dragon he was meant to be? And another question, just so I don't regret reading this later, is there any s@x@al moment with the women in his baby Cthulhu form? Because I really find it disgusting, and after reading it, I won't be able to continue reading. That's why I want to know before reading, so I don't waste my time and regret it later. Thank you in advance.

I just want to know one thing: how exactly did he know that the price to exchange galleons was 5 pounds per galleon? Out of nowhere, he appeared saying he wanted to exchange 1,000 pounds for 200 galleons, as if he already had information about that???

I just want to know one thing: why in chapter 2 did MC say he wanted to get stronger and develop in the Shadows, but... out of nowhere he joins the Loki Familia??? Seriously, man??? How is he going to develop in the Shadows, as he said, while being in the Loki Familia??? There were so many families, man. For example, wouldn't Miach be a good choice? Just him as an adventurer and no one to meddle in his affairs other than Miach himself. And since the Miach family makes potions, it would be great for him, because, well... his family makes potions, right? lol

Man, the story is really cool, it's very well written, and it has a good plot. But... I think there are two major problems with your writing. First, most of the fights are pretty boring, because the characters always stall before attacking. For example, the first time a Demon appeared at the orphanage, when Ramiel showed up to fight the Demon, he just stalled, and because of that, the Demon fled. And when Principal Bryan joined the fight against the Noble Demon, he stalled too. And no malice intended, but it irritates me, at least me... Second, and perhaps most importantly, there's NOTHING special about Raye, no special Powers or Abilities, nothing special, be it her magic or swordsmanship. There's nothing special about her. The story is really cool, no doubt, but because of this, it starts to get boring and tedious, you know...

When I got to chapter 15 and saw what Morgana did to him, that was the moment I completely abandoned the story. She kidnapped him, forced him to fight, and beat him. And the master of ceremonies said nothing. Soon after, she told him that if he defeated 10 more students in a tournament, she would accept him as a disciple, and he simply accepted it like a damn masochist!!!!!! She literally kidnapped him and beat him, and he said nothing. At that moment, I could already feel my hatred for the master of ceremonies starting to grow, 🤣🤣🤣, and I've already decided to stop reading because it's better for me. 🤣🤣

It's only good in the first few chapters, because it only gets worse after that. The MC is an ADULT in a child's body, but he often doesn't act like one. I stopped reading in the chapter where the MC's mother talks to Clementine and tells her that MC Desmond would take Clementine's daughter, Diane, to the gym with him, without even asking the MC's opinion on the matter... And this happens right after he ends his friendship with Clementine. And the MC simply accepts it, even if he doesn't want to... I didn't explain it very well, but if you read it, you'll understand. This is something I really hate in an MC, a shitty MC who simply accepts the shit thrown at him, even if it's his mother... Or rather, a mother and father who were never present in his life... Well, does that count as venting? 😮‍💨🤣🤣🤣

Before I start reading, let me ask: will the clones have relationships with other characters or something? Because I find that really weird and I'd like to know before I start reading!!!

The story is pretty cool and all, but his zanpakuto completely ruins the reading with her comments for everyone to hear, talking about foot fetish and sitting on his face, and everyone hears her talking, if it was just the MC who heard it would be cool, but everyone hears it, it's very embarrassing to read, if it weren't for that it would be an amazing story!!!