Diana_Carvalho_2185

tho you are right im drop this, the action, power dynamics, and even plot is a bit off, i just prefer action ig.

true, but our MC is not even jounin in skill. Hiashi would skin him alive, the only reason Naruto was able to marry Hinata is because the guy was going to become hokage.

This Naruto story is turning more into a love story than anything else

One of those retards... learn to read, if you noticed, theres more than just the age gap thats a problem, the legal headache the MC will receive from screwing two clan heads is so unrealistic. Plus hes like, 4 years older than them, even if in Naruto tradition its not a big deal, our MC should have some morals or something.

I mean, I’m not fond of our MC being a child predator, the age gap being abit to big, not counting him being like 30 in mental age.

I mean it’s alright, tho id like for Ren, the adult, not too screw his students 😑. Just make him use this knowledge to invent an efficient way to grow his reserves in chakra while also making it denser. Just you know, keep in mind even Hiashi warned Ren.

Yeah, this one alr

Seems pretty cool rn but I hope the MC starts to train abit more, if he can somehow make a way to transfer all the chakra back into him from his shadow clones then that would be huge, after all he blocked the mind transfer.

not really, obito did too with the 3 tails

Those doubting how strong the mc is, remember, naruto was kicking ass after the timeskip, and he was younger than the mc