dantecoltz

This guys heart was stabbed through, kokabiel shouldnt be able to move.. or mc wouldve gone for his head.

also, i always liked shiny raikou, one of the few pokemon where shiny form looks sooo much better.

did mc and brock just blurted leaf?

1 swipe chapter, the standard used to be 3000 words a chapter until TLs start splitting releases, now it feels like they have split again.

is that what the blue spider lily does? i dont think it turns them human, it just removes the weakness no?

its literally prepping her on a silver plater to die by a demon.

it pisses me off mc has sasted 5yrs of kanaes life in her most important growth period of training, not to mention it takes more time to compensate for the lack of muscle strength. wtf is mc doing? just because he has a loli child complex?

Saeko Busujima: despicable loathesome cur. -Saeko Busujima has left the group chat! -x5 ******* has left the chatgroup -congratulation you are now group leader! - chatgroup terminated

the novel started out above avg , great potential with effort and thought evident in the planning. Then abridged popo show up which i thought was a fun cameo until.... everything became terrible like its just trying to be abridged. everyone talks like sandbox teen punks, mc starts making normal everyday choices into some suspicious drama and purposed the plot into mc being some villain. everyone went out of character and extreme reliance emphasis on mc. The whole zfighters team is mc/everyone/vegnappa the team is shattered into cliches. it no longer has the comraderie and more like distant colleagues. story continues to be a mess but the plot always forces mc selfishly into center stage, and everyone else had to deal with mc.

ok, i think its high time to shut piccolo up. its fine if he doesnt trust mc but fking keep it to himself and not involve the group dynamics. claim piccolo should take over and mc op out, tell him to do better and condrmn himself if anyone dies. fkin gd luck. as piccolo should be relatively matire he should make himself usefull and stop participating to the detriment to the group. or just fking suk it up.