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It's up to you though......😏

The novel is fun to read not overtly complicated, I also advise the author to lean more on power fantasy and take the story itself less seriously because it deviates from the target audience, It's hard to please everyone because pleasing everyone will please no one. I don't know if the novel is dropped but if it's not I definitely recommend this for people who want male protagonists with tons of beauty around him (charismatic, charming, overpowered, intelligent and edgy). The author seems to lack the motivation to continue since the story is not received well (usually readers are very unfair and often focus on appealing start, and this novel lacked that appeal, it was pretty bland in the beginning that's why it flopped , but honestly I advise the author to continue it because you still have some supporters and it could be a strong niche (also building a reputation where you wouldn't abandon a work simply because its failing (I know some might say why it matters, I would say it matters because people that read this novel will read your other work and feel confident that their investment would not go to waste).

Fun novel, good power fantasy, just hope the mc don't be too cynical. I don't think the idea of not falling in love is a good thing but being cautious and expecting less is a good mindset just don't dismiss outright the idea of love. Also Sophie is the best girl, I think she should be one of the main wives preferably no.1 (there could be multiple no.1. anyways), She warms my heart with the cooking and she seems really nice. the idea of cynicism is not foolish but living by it at all times is foolish.

Much more impressive than the Supreme harem god system, you probably should publish this in Amazon and the start was weird with the harem implications.

Why do other female so good compare to Zoey? this is like Nyx from evolution of the ruined heir where somehow she is not the fl but felt more like an fl? author are you okay?

BRO......U COOKED HIM....COOKED & CRISP.

Pls just don't make the same messy romance like Atticus's Odyssey. I know its rude to bring that up but that sh*t was messed up.

There are 5 types of reactions from readers (good, bad, average, personal preference, frustration. The amazing parts of this novel? 1. World Building - unique power system, expansive compelling universe; it's interesting how unique the history where the main characters operate. The detail of the world is bountiful on the imaginations of the readers. The classification and mind of the author is imaginative with cool descriptions including images. 2. The male lead - He is incredibly realistic. he has a compelling viewpoint that is neither good nor evil. The way he portrays the means of being a leader and the question he asks on what it means to one add details on the details, such as his moral alignment and understanding of his role in the world, the grasp on the consequence of responsibility in being in his position. 3. The female lead - Her loyalty and love towards the male lead is aspiring that it gives you the feeling of appreciation and desire. The way her character was portrayed, including complexities it has on having a beautiful face and the consequence when you are incapable of protecting yourself due to it. Her support, such as assurance when the male lead faces problems that he insists on facing it alone. the ability to give absolute trust on the male lead despite the dangers enemies posed during crisis when he assured her is sweet. The bad part of the novel? 1. the writing - The way the author writes feels like his trying to be poetic and rhyming every word but ended up giving problematic narration; it can be immersive sometimes, but every emotional moment has dialogues that make a reader wince due to the author forcing it just to give that feeling. You need to expand and study more English language to make that happen. If the author desires to rhyme it every moment of emotions, then you need to have a huge vocabulary, almost every poetry that exist you can find has deep language. There are novels that use the same style, and most web novel readers accused it of being AI because the way AI writes always rhymes similar to a song or poetry, AI also has elements of flowery words. Such writings evoke an emotional or blood pumping feeling when done correctly, there are numerous examples both published and online; for online novels there is Atticus Odyssey (which some early readers accused of using AI, but AI is supposed to be short and give you the feeling that the writing is going nowhere which Atticus Odyssey is clearly does not.) My only example for published book, as I am not too familiar with it due to my interest on nonfiction books compare to fiction; The best example is Odyssey, it literally is hundreds of pages poetry, the language is hard to understand that it gives you a feeling similar to reading philosophy book of Nietzche. My rating - Good, it fits my personal preference (I love romance and overpowered main characters), it's not frustrating as give you the satisfaction you're eagerly waiting.

Don't listen to this idiot who love harem.