LoveKimya

A very potential one indeed, but I"m slightly confused with your writing, and it went premium real fast! But I still love it lol X) Please continue it, it seems like a beautiful piece

Next!

It's splendid, but paced too quick to the sudden plot! And I think that the sypnopsis doesn't relaly represent the actual story of the story. But great one with lots of potential

T-This is getting too fast!

Now That's Hot!! Well, pretty love the development is very great at the beginning with tons of great cahracter introductions, but it seems that the author is struggling in finishing all of the hanging plots as there are still lots of stories hanging, but maybe it's a straategy to prolong the story? But overall I love it, please continue~~~

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That was a very fine reading! But please, I rather have you post not too fast rather than bulking some posts with poor qualities of writing. Enjoying it to this point, great work, Author-san!

Nice! Next!!