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I understand that the storyline probably needed to.head this direction, but those other boys broke into his home and attacked him. I just don't understand why he was sent to solitary confinement, and no one seems to have questioned this other than me.

I have enjoyed reading this story very much up to the last few chapters . Why has the MC all of a sudden begun speaking in third person? This is reducing the MC to someone who lacks confidence. People who speak in the third person have a severe lack of confidence.

This main character is too dumb, supposed to be trained in medical knowledge, a Dr., this makes no sense at all to be too dumb. Granda turned into an older sister in law? And an elderly auntie as well? So many mistakes, and then a school friend and the baby and the suckkng .. yes, this socks. Not reading any further.

Dawes is a ghost and stood by the door to tell him to listen to the woman and didn't scare the living soul from the girl or the man? Or did he wake up, and get up, yet not cause a commotion because he awoke from a coma? Or was this a mistake and grandma was supposed to be the one standing there?

These chapters were worth the wait ! I am enjoying this book very much so far .

I'll be waiting for the new chapters when you are able to upload more. be safe in your travels.

Excellent story, and I'm enjoying reading this one.

Love this book so far. The way the author builds the character of each person, giving insights as to their thoughts as the story progresses Excellent writing style!

Excellent writing, very interesting storyline. It is an enjoyable read for people of most age.