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2024-08-09 JoinedJapan
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  • Dummy_Account_5194
    Dummy_Account_51943 months ago
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    Evaluation: Above Average Potential: Gem Current Chapter: 21 WQ (4/5): There are multiple grammar inconsistency which are manageable and doesn't affect the FF itself too much but better resolve it via proof reading or ai script corrections. SD (5/5): With an average to fast pace developme nts without affecting the story & MC progression. CD (5/5): MC is an SI 'sunspot' not that OP as he also uses his foreknowledge plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of MarvelVerse. Has a chaotic-neutral temperament which is a plus and on the antihero alignment (punisher/Deadpool type) which is apt for his survivability. US (3/5): Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. A snail-pace approach when it comes to updates availability. WB (4/5): The FF is still in its development phase and we haven't noticed any other branch of MCU or marvel stories yet. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

  • Dummy_Account_5194
    Dummy_Account_51943 months ago
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    as of ch.50, still no news or a tinge of any shadow monarch prowess. storys logic is zero.

  • Dummy_Account_5194
    Dummy_Account_51943 months ago
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    time traveller - usually shown on chinese to english machine translated novel. at least put some effort in proof reading or use chatgpt or any other ai script xD