geoslim21
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only watched episode 1 so far will probably bing it next weekend while dog sitting.
Please tell me his dad is not named Bruce
realist hero. that is a harem and the mc already got married and had kids (in the novel)
um where is the rest of the chapter?
shadow clones are a B-rank technique in naruto
like others I like v2 more. while the first 15 years were rushed it is understandable why since there really wasn't much that could happen other than growing up and training. wish there was more detail to the training though. I would like to see more detail on his travels and maybe side chapters showing his family after learning about him leaving and Amber and Qrow discussing Jaune after she left the village. Can't wait for the official start of v2 though
I say leave it. I may not usually be a fan of stories with Salem as a romantic interest but I really enjoyed this story and how you handled her before. Can't wait to see what you do with the new version.
yup (I know a lot of people don't like how bi tch y she is early on but she is one of my favorite rwby girls)
this is the second time I have read a series where cellphone was translated as handphone. this is also the only time I have seen the use of this term in this story
anyone else think a railing that low is dangerous. I mean that is only a little over a foot and a half high and seems more like a tripping hazard than a safety precaution.
I find it funny that you can get away with censoring that word by censoring the "i"
ok no author note but the "swipe left to continue" is the only thing on page 33
I will admit to skipping over most of the stats but you are right that people are exaggerating how much space they took up. on my phone (galaxy note 9) the chapter is 33 pages and the stats start on page 3 (though his name is the last thing on page 2) and they end at the bottom of page 17. a total of 15 pages exactly (plus one line if you take into account the name at the end of page 2). taking into account the space for the chapter title, author note, and the vote and comment buttons at the end i would say nearly 50% of the chapter was stats
AO3 and Fanfiction DOT net are sites you can post stories and are quite popular. AO3 has some good filtering options since it is the only site I have found that let's you sort out what kind of pairings you want to read in the stories you read (m/m, f/f, m/f, multi)